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Time Travel
I think love is a drug
that suffocates the soul.
A heart throbs at first breath
to survive.
I'd love to enter the domain,
meditate with the thumping
of the drumming.
And when the process is finished;
I can be born again.
I can perfect the feeling,
prepare for the hurt.
that suffocates the soul.
A heart throbs at first breath
to survive.
I'd love to enter the domain,
meditate with the thumping
of the drumming.
And when the process is finished;
I can be born again.
I can perfect the feeling,
prepare for the hurt.
Published 26th Jul 2015
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26th Jul 2015 2:14pm
Would not we all wish to do this...? But we would first have to travel to the future to figure it out, the go back into our past to avoid it all together. Then we become a race of time meddlers. There just isn't enough time for one life. I would go back and give my younger self copies of my poetry books and then take my younger self and go back to an even young version of us, then keep doing that so we had enough copies of ourselves to make one of our lives perfect.... jj jj jj jj jj lol
27th Jul 2015 9:34am
You're so deep. I see what you did there.
This poem was written for the competition about the different dimension.
This poem was written for the competition about the different dimension.
27th Jul 2015 7:43pm
Ahhh, well, strangely, I happened to be sitting in a restaurant the night before last that is across the street from an apartment I have a very old, bad memory at. I was thinking of how nice it would be to go back 33 years and make a different choice that would change all of the other bad choices that snowballed into a life that melted into a deep pile of slush... I started writing a poem on a napkin about travelling back in time, then I got home and saw your poem, so it got me thinking some more. I have to finish writing that poem now. jj jj jj HA!
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26th Jul 2015 8:39pm
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27th Jul 2015 9:35am
27th Jul 2015 3:30am
If only...
It's funny how the pain is never quite the same with each experience. I don't think all the prepping and time travel in the world would ever be able to help. You can prepare for the outcome but never just how it'll hit you. I do like the idea of 'perfecting the feeling' though.
Interesting write, well put together. Enjoyed.
It's funny how the pain is never quite the same with each experience. I don't think all the prepping and time travel in the world would ever be able to help. You can prepare for the outcome but never just how it'll hit you. I do like the idea of 'perfecting the feeling' though.
Interesting write, well put together. Enjoyed.
27th Jul 2015 9:37am
Dear WoundedHeart,
Thank you for stopping by.
P.S.~ I agree with you.
Thank you for stopping by.
P.S.~ I agree with you.
