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Falling hard
When I saw you..
My heart had skipped a beat.
My hands lost their touch,
And my head dropped to my feet.
The way your hair was tied,
The way you looked at me.
Now I'm pretty sure I lied,
I wasn't aching to be free.
You hugged with utmost passion.
A smile rose from your cheeks..
My heart had skipped a beat.
My hands lost their touch,
And my head dropped to my feet.
The way your hair was tied,
The way you looked at me.
Now I'm pretty sure I lied,
I wasn't aching to be free.
You hugged with utmost passion.
A smile rose from your cheeks..
Published 22nd Jul 2015
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22nd Jul 2015 1:00am
Cute poem, has a hint of innocence and sweetness to it.
Yet very loving.
Yet very loving.
22nd Jul 2015 1:13am
22nd Jul 2015 1:14am
25th Jul 2015 8:05pm
With a deep sigh, it reminds me of how first love measures to love later in life.
Great job.
Great job.
24th Aug 2015 2:44pm
People change, as do feelings.
Sad but true.
aside from that is love the only thing that we have at the end of the end, and the only thing we actually take with us when we pass.
Love, wether early on or later keeps us going when we think we've lost all the rest.
Thanks for reading! :)
Sad but true.
aside from that is love the only thing that we have at the end of the end, and the only thing we actually take with us when we pass.
Love, wether early on or later keeps us going when we think we've lost all the rest.
Thanks for reading! :)
1st Nov 2015 8:52am
8th Aug 2016 4:53pm
like the others said, it is a perfectly cute and sweet little poem. good stuff
