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Ode To You, Sir
Even in my darkest hours you were by my side
I edured months without a flicker of light
You were with me, my Thunder
Me, your lil echo following your voice home
You Sir, my man, my lover, my friend
You, the manilest of men
I've seen and felt your softer side
Whispers of your kisses illuminating my path
Always present was your mystic form
In my constant dream state I was with you
Our passion dancing through my mind
Gliding your Lil Belle back into your arms
I edured months without a flicker of light
You were with me, my Thunder
Me, your lil echo following your voice home
You Sir, my man, my lover, my friend
You, the manilest of men
I've seen and felt your softer side
Whispers of your kisses illuminating my path
Always present was your mystic form
In my constant dream state I was with you
Our passion dancing through my mind
Gliding your Lil Belle back into your arms
Published 20th Jul 2015
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20th Jul 2015 9:57pm
Beautiful write Belle. You've kept your imagination and way with words. I'm sure this Sir appreciates you very deeply.
20th Jul 2015 9:57pm
that's a unusual one for you belle but it is nice to know he was there for you I am sure he deserves it
20th Jul 2015 10:12pm
20th Jul 2015 10:44pm
Belle, this piece is as touching as it is beautiful. I am glad that you are back with us.
21st Jul 2015 00:04am
21st Jul 2015 3:23am
Awe Belle.....so very beautiful to the soul that has stood beside you with luv.....a guiding heart to help you along the way......welcome back.....luv....hugs and prayers your way xo :)
21st Jul 2015 6:17am
Ahhh, lilsouthernbelle, luv ~ :-*
This poem is a tender, loving, and, yes, heart-wrenching magnificence.
Tis such a lovely tribute to He who was your beacon through times dark and sere. And, this is, indeed, quite wonderful and marvelous. :-*
What wrenches at one is that there's been a dark path you've trodden for so long, ma chérie.
I am so glad you are able to re-enter the light and that there was One who could be a lighthouse for you to fix your radiant star upon, for you are ever-radiant, luv... :-*
This poem is a tender, loving, and, yes, heart-wrenching magnificence.
Tis such a lovely tribute to He who was your beacon through times dark and sere. And, this is, indeed, quite wonderful and marvelous. :-*
What wrenches at one is that there's been a dark path you've trodden for so long, ma chérie.
I am so glad you are able to re-enter the light and that there was One who could be a lighthouse for you to fix your radiant star upon, for you are ever-radiant, luv... :-*
21st Jul 2015 7:48am
so glad your hours are brighter now, Belle. it's wonderful to have you back in the underground...
Anonymous
21st Jul 2015 3:05pm
lilsouthernbelle,
A wonderfully written ode. so glad to have you back in the light!
tornado
A wonderfully written ode. so glad to have you back in the light!
tornado
29th Jul 2015 1:03am
Classy lady you are
Delicate edges of lace
Strength of leather in hand
Finding vision in the darkness
The dreamers light
A warrior's weapon
Making nightmares
A goddesses wonderland
Delicate edges of lace
Strength of leather in hand
Finding vision in the darkness
The dreamers light
A warrior's weapon
Making nightmares
A goddesses wonderland
29th Jul 2015 4:32pm
6th Aug 2015 11:23am
Such stunning words lilsouthernbelle. That's one very fortunate man. Your words, your passionate & your mind must all be so beautiful to him. Please continue to write & inspire us.
