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Big Sky
Tonight, it's just me.
Watching dusk skies
Purples, pinks
Blackening blues.
Little lights
Punching through.
Brighter now,
Brighter still.
Gravity reversed
Like I'm the only one
Under it
Falling.
All thoughts turn
To you
Under your skies
Are you falling too?
Watching dusk skies
Purples, pinks
Blackening blues.
Little lights
Punching through.
Brighter now,
Brighter still.
Gravity reversed
Like I'm the only one
Under it
Falling.
All thoughts turn
To you
Under your skies
Are you falling too?
Published 18th Jul 2015
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18th Jul 2015 6:00am
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18th Jul 2015 6:35am
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18th Jul 2015 6:44am
18th Jul 2015 7:03am
18th Jul 2015 2:35pm
18th Jul 2015 1:00pm
I like the questioning at the end ?
There is do much depth in your writing, I look forward to every entry
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There is do much depth in your writing, I look forward to every entry
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18th Jul 2015 2:36pm
18th Jul 2015 4:43pm
Nothing like sharing a sky, even if it's bruised upon occasion. "Are you falling too?" This could be a love poem. Great job in any case Lookie. Your stars are out this morning!
18th Jul 2015 8:56pm
18th Jul 2015 11:52pm
Wicked sweet, I enjoyed the way you expressed yourself here in this ink spill....
Really nice poem Lool.. i wonder those same thoughts...
Zazzles xoxox
Really nice poem Lool.. i wonder those same thoughts...
Zazzles xoxox
20th Jul 2015 3:50am
Sometimes the simplest words are the best words.
Do we all wonder this? I think so.
Thanks love.
Do we all wonder this? I think so.
Thanks love.
Anonymous
30th Jul 2015 4:54am
Oh Lookie.....if he is I'm sure it's your way.....your write beautifully.....my lose for not reading you sooner.....xo :)
30th Jul 2015 5:19pm
