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Iron Persona
She severed my voice
From her ears.
I feared solitude again.
To hide my ugliness
I donned a rusty mask,
And cast a shadow
On the lighter self
To expose my darkness.
Who wants to explore
The murky cellars of my heart?
I found her dark morals more sensual
And accepting than
the brood of day
And, though. there is
Distance
and Damage, it is
Unspoken.
As the shadows grow opaque
And the mold beautiful
I still long to touch her skin.
From her ears.
I feared solitude again.
To hide my ugliness
I donned a rusty mask,
And cast a shadow
On the lighter self
To expose my darkness.
Who wants to explore
The murky cellars of my heart?
I found her dark morals more sensual
And accepting than
the brood of day
And, though. there is
Distance
and Damage, it is
Unspoken.
As the shadows grow opaque
And the mold beautiful
I still long to touch her skin.
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Re: Iron Persona
6th Jul 2015 7:04pm
This is agonizing, DPW, and beautiful. I would search those cellars, despite the risk of age old cadavers.
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re: Re: Iron Persona
6th Jul 2015 7:26pm
Thank you VP. I would let you venture those cellars whenever you are ready.
Re: Iron Persona
6th Jul 2015 7:07pm
re: Re: Iron Persona
6th Jul 2015 7:26pm
Re: Iron Persona
6th Jul 2015 8:56pm
Here is another poem you have written that I can completely relate to in an almost eerie way. I feel these words describe me. Wow.
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re: Re: Iron Persona
14th Jul 2015 8:34pm
That is quite a compliment, Sam! We must be cut from the same cloth, as they say.
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re: Re: Iron Persona
14th Jul 2015 8:36pm
Those cellars can be a darkness we embrace or trapped in despair. I have seen both. Thank you for saying Taryn.
Re: Iron Persona
7th Jul 2015 4:50pm
"And cast a shadow
On the lighter self
To expose my darkness."
~such sweet complexity, very effective!
great opening lines lured me in & enjoyed the
bitter longing still- to touch, by end.
be well!
~d
On the lighter self
To expose my darkness."
~such sweet complexity, very effective!
great opening lines lured me in & enjoyed the
bitter longing still- to touch, by end.
be well!
~d
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7th Jul 2015 10:41pm
Re: Iron Persona
11th Jul 2015 7:18am
so there may be substance in the shadows, arousing to the touch. deliverance from the lonelines...
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14th Jul 2015 8:36pm
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