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Freedom
Body, tired.
I've replaced you
With an extra
Pilates class.
Pushing muscle
Bone
Screaming fascia
Sweating into it.
'Get out of your head'
Resonating, vibrating.
A moment, an hour
Just enough time
To pull back.
To escape
Seething thoughts,
Blanketing
My life.
Be gone.
I've replaced you
With an extra
Pilates class.
Pushing muscle
Bone
Screaming fascia
Sweating into it.
'Get out of your head'
Resonating, vibrating.
A moment, an hour
Just enough time
To pull back.
To escape
Seething thoughts,
Blanketing
My life.
Be gone.
Published 6th Jul 2015
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6th Jul 2015 7:18pm
Looloo....thank you for this! No better way to rid the plagues of your mind than sweating them out through your body. I feel this hard. Great write!
6th Jul 2015 8:54pm
Anonymous
6th Jul 2015 9:13pm
I whole heartedly agree, nothing better than pushing your body to sweaty limits for a cleansing effect
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2015 7:09am
Harmless...although I felt you should have ringed his neck for making you sweat...Enjoyed...xoxo, Devlin:)
7th Jul 2015 8:47pm
At least you're keeping in shape. I used to do this all the time. I'd hit a heavy bag, visualizing the faces of my foes, usually bank unit managers. Fine work!
10th Jul 2015 3:06am
