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The Fairer Sex...
Her eyes,
Her smile,
Her charm,
Her wit,
Her kiss.
There is nothing "fair" about it.
Her smile,
Her charm,
Her wit,
Her kiss.
There is nothing "fair" about it.
Published 6th Jul 2015
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6th Jul 2015 2:59pm
6th Jul 2015 3:35pm
6th Jul 2015 4:20pm
oh i just love this! it leaves me wondering what is not fair about it? i love pieces where i get to decide. are they terrible eyes, smile, etc? or are they so fierce that it's not fair to inflict them on another person.
quite lovely.
quite lovely.
6th Jul 2015 6:58pm
Ahhh, ifsheonlyknew, luv ~ :-*
You're sounding a bit beleaguered in this poem as though she's all boons and you're overwhelmed, delightfully so, mayhap, but feeling as though she has some unsporting assets. ;-p
This poem is relentlessly clever, luv. You've done such a skillful job in so few words of conveying this perfectly. :-*
You're sounding a bit beleaguered in this poem as though she's all boons and you're overwhelmed, delightfully so, mayhap, but feeling as though she has some unsporting assets. ;-p
This poem is relentlessly clever, luv. You've done such a skillful job in so few words of conveying this perfectly. :-*
6th Jul 2015 9:47pm
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6th Jul 2015 8:55pm
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9th Jul 2015 00:21am
i can so relate to this ifshe...
the kiss...hmmm....there is nothing like 'the kiss'....
the kiss...hmmm....there is nothing like 'the kiss'....
9th Jul 2015 3:54pm
Anonymous
9th Jan 2016 4:29am
There is nothing fair about the fairer sex if you are missing it.
