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Shelter
Stay awake
I can't see now
I can't feel now
I can't stay now
In my shelter
In my shelter I must run
I must run
Cannot stay
I must go away
I must run to play
No longer inside
My sheltered hide
I can't stay awake
I can't stay awake
I can't stay awake
I can't stay awake
I am leaving today
I am on my own way
I must leave today
Leave my sheltered space
I can't see now
I can't feel now
I can't stay now
In my shelter
In my shelter I must run
I must run
Cannot stay
I must go away
I must run to play
No longer inside
My sheltered hide
I can't stay awake
I can't stay awake
I can't stay awake
I can't stay awake
I am leaving today
I am on my own way
I must leave today
Leave my sheltered space
Published 6th Jul 2015
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6th Jul 2015 3:17am
Bravo! luv that I got to hear the flow
in this.. & key is strong.
reminds of how I feel on stay-at-home *lounging days..to steer clear of people & conversation. Your song is the part that says "get up & get out!" <~quote frm song "Gone!"/ The Cure
..like any other slow song from their Wild Mood Swings" album.
enjoyed m'friend, stick w/it!
~d
in this.. & key is strong.
reminds of how I feel on stay-at-home *lounging days..to steer clear of people & conversation. Your song is the part that says "get up & get out!" <~quote frm song "Gone!"/ The Cure
..like any other slow song from their Wild Mood Swings" album.
enjoyed m'friend, stick w/it!
~d
6th Jul 2015 10:54pm
Thanks! I am glad you liked it, this brings joy to me.
Thank you my friend for the kind words!
Thank you my friend for the kind words!
10th Jul 2015 10:33am
10th Jul 2015 11:12am
