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Last Night at the Bar
Music and darkness, all there is,
She sits beside him, eyes on his.
Black dress, low cut and oh so tight,
She smiles and asks him for a light.
A split second, he sees it all…
Tender embrace, the rise and fall
Of love they’ll make, no questions asked,
But merely their passions unmasked.
Her lipstick dark, eyes soft and pale,
A readiness hers to avail,
She grabs his hand with the flame lit,
Eye-contact yielding all of it.
The dance… the chase… the pulse... the ache.
The push so far in she should break.
The kiss… the claw… the splay… the sin
The mess he’ll leave upon her skin.
The nibbles low, the slap of sac
The nail marks left in his back.
The hands on throat, the fingers bit
And her relishing all of it…
From her position, up on top
Her breasts bared for him, tender, soft.
The slide… the grind… the pelvic thrust
Unable to sate such deep lust.
The grab… the throw… the switch of hole,
Impaling her upon his pole.
The gasp… the sigh… the rhythm set
With her insides dripping, so wet.
The leg on shoulder… spaces shared
With fingers filling the holes bared
And the pressure building within,
This time giving a fuck who wins.
Slamming it home deep, breaking soul,
Flipping lighter shut, in control…
Just to hear disappointed moan,
As I walk off to drink alone.
Published 5th Jul 2015
| Edited 6th Jul 2015
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6th Jul 2015 1:14am
You know, I read somewhere that on first dates, or meeting, or whatever (I can't really remember), that a man has already had sex with you 50 different ways in his mind before the date is even over. But this seems to me that she is the pursuer and he sees the trouble (despite pleasure)it will be and chooses to walk away from it.
That is commendable strength. I am always impressed by your form and rhyme scheme.
That is commendable strength. I am always impressed by your form and rhyme scheme.
Indeed, Ahavati, sometimes it is better to just move along, whether for self preservation, or just for the fact that sometimes there are things far more important things a man's mind should be on than just sex. I happen to have had one at this time. I thank you for catching the meaning to this. :)
Michael
Michael
6th Jul 2015 5:41am
this piece is absolutely hot Michael... you flow effectless begining to end... thx for sharing this piece
7th Jul 2015 00:05am
Thank you, MagicVisionz, for gracing my page, and for the compliments. :)
Michael
Michael
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7th Jul 2015 1:50pm
Oh, I'm sure *she got it, Taryn. Some people just aren't capable of doing without. Nothing to forgive dear... I do try to maintain a low profile in this particular forum. :) smiling at your tingles.
Michael
Michael
