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Secret Love
Her vagina is neat and trim
When she invites my penis in
She hopes she will have an orgasm
As my penis pumps her chasm.
Orgasms in her G-spot and clit
Come soon; we are a good fit
She responds well with me
Of her inhibitions she is free
When she invites my penis in
She hopes she will have an orgasm
As my penis pumps her chasm.
Orgasms in her G-spot and clit
Come soon; we are a good fit
She responds well with me
Of her inhibitions she is free
Published 2nd Jul 2015
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2nd Jul 2015 10:57am
There's nothing like gratuitous sexuality to get the blood pumping in the morning. Way to go!
2nd Jul 2015 11:41am
As gratuitous as a quickie. The poem in structure is as sudden as a quickie. Great job!
Anonymous
15th Aug 2015 10:21am
No frills: straight into it. In the month or so since I have been frequenting this place, it's become obvious that if you want a heap of readers, just mark it as adult. It's a shame that people come here to be titillated and not to appreciate the wit and humour that really abounds here. As an example, I posted two pithy pieces in the orgasm haiku forum. They weren't erotic, they were just silly humour, but because of the rating, they got hundreds of reads. I enjoy reading your work.
16th Aug 2015 8:38am
I agree I try hard to give my poems a true classification but there is a temptation to class most as erotic when only some are.
