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Joyous Night
Can you hear the whisper of the night
as shadows fall in the dark; creatures
croak and chirp; as if saying hello to
the summer breeze as it gently brushes
past; Dampness drifts into my tired soul;
my drenched lips hush to you;
Have a joyous night!
as shadows fall in the dark; creatures
croak and chirp; as if saying hello to
the summer breeze as it gently brushes
past; Dampness drifts into my tired soul;
my drenched lips hush to you;
Have a joyous night!
Published 1st Jul 2015
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1st Jul 2015 2:31am
1st Jul 2015 2:36am
Anonymous
1st Jul 2015 2:48am
And here I thought "Joyous" was just for Christmas! I ought to be shot for not thinking it could be a poem within itself. . .a Beautiful write, Miss Tommie Lynn. . .Devlin;)
1st Jul 2015 3:33am
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1st Jul 2015 6:09am
I have always admired with what skill you incorporate nature into your work...this is a beautiful example. Wonderful verse, Tommie!
1st Jul 2015 1:57pm
1st Jul 2015 5:00pm
Darkness falls likes black velvet here, a comfort and a mystery. Beautiful work Tommie.
1st Jul 2015 5:12pm
Well said crowfly, a comfort and a mystery!
I truly appreciate you reading me,thank you. :)
I truly appreciate you reading me,thank you. :)
