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Hey! You out there!
was looking about through the rushes
just searching for an old friend
last seen more than a while ago
walking out the door
they ran punching through my mind
an dove into this cold coffee cup
making a splash
firing brown water into my eyes
which triggered my brain to trip on the switch
an my fingers to type
the name in the frame
searching with the bright lights on
with this web of mine cast
pulling out there this way n that
I felt no tug nor holler
from the friend whos back I last saw walking off with your pillbox hat
just searching for an old friend
last seen more than a while ago
walking out the door
they ran punching through my mind
an dove into this cold coffee cup
making a splash
firing brown water into my eyes
which triggered my brain to trip on the switch
an my fingers to type
the name in the frame
searching with the bright lights on
with this web of mine cast
pulling out there this way n that
I felt no tug nor holler
from the friend whos back I last saw walking off with your pillbox hat
Published 31st May 2011
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piece! One issue with "nor no", I think you should just take out the "no" for grammar stickler purposes (or maybe it's just me). Otherwise, I was enchanted with the friend running and diving. Fantastic image.
