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Petals Of Luv
our spirits embrace
in the heavens above
hear the Angels sing
"holy is your luv"
sweet song in our hearts
humming along so happily
among clouds our luv will reside
a sacred paradise for just you and I
stars shine heavenly beauty
kissing us with their stunning colors
a promise that our luv
will forever be graced with Angelic blessings
where purple roses will always bloom
sacred place where petals of luv cradle us
our private garden of Eden we painted with kisses
where sprits are felt in the rivers flow
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
in the heavens above
hear the Angels sing
"holy is your luv"
sweet song in our hearts
humming along so happily
among clouds our luv will reside
a sacred paradise for just you and I
stars shine heavenly beauty
kissing us with their stunning colors
a promise that our luv
will forever be graced with Angelic blessings
where purple roses will always bloom
sacred place where petals of luv cradle us
our private garden of Eden we painted with kisses
where sprits are felt in the rivers flow
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
Published 29th Jun 2015
| Edited 30th Jun 2015
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29th Jun 2015 5:38am
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30th Jun 2015 00:13am
Sweet S......thank you for such sweet words.....im very touched my the "WOW!".....thank you for dropping by and sharing a cloud....xo :)
29th Jun 2015 5:38am
Ahhh, what a sweet beautiful poem, full of all the good things in life. well written!
30th Jun 2015 00:41am
Thank you Scarlet for stopping my way.......I'm so glad you've enjoyed this......simple things in life are the best.....xo :)
Anonymous
29th Jun 2015 5:47am
As usual, your velvety words combining love and beauty. That heart of yours is full and you spread it around to all of us, thank you.
30th Jun 2015 00:43am
Sweet SG........what a beautiful thing to say to me......your sweet words have brought a smile upon my soul.....thank you for sharing your sweet soul....xo :)
29th Jun 2015 5:48am
Whenever you express the purple love blooming in your beating hear, the world shines with a violet hue that makes the sky look beautiful... makes me want to lay on a cloud drifting in your sphere... jj
30th Jun 2015 00:47am
Awe JJ.....thank you for pulling up a cloud and imagining with me......xo :)
29th Jun 2015 5:49am
A lovely tale told in purple pen and petal.
Nobody does it quite like you, ES.
You know what I mean.
xo
EV
Nobody does it quite like you, ES.
You know what I mean.
xo
EV
30th Jun 2015 1:10am
Oh EV.....you are a sweet soul.....I just luv ya......tipping my pen to you in.....um.....purple corruptiveness......xo :)
29th Jun 2015 7:42am
you always write good poems so nicely done and great picture with your colour which looks great
30th Jun 2015 2:32am
Glen you always make me smile......I'm glad you like the write and the pic......thank you my sweet friend xo :)
29th Jun 2015 1:36pm
I like this piece very much. Not sure what is doing in the erotic section. But it is very beautiful.
30th Jun 2015 2:45am
Hi.....thank you so much for stopping by my way......I put my writes under "erotic" cause the "love" section here is of pain.....they have no "romantic" section here......I'm glad you thought it beautiful.....xo :)
29th Jun 2015 7:32pm
I'd rather see your spirits embrace than collide, but other than that I loved this Flower. Great job!
30th Jun 2015 2:46am
Thank you Crow for the guidance......I will change it just for you.....which I rarely do.....LOL!!! Appreciate you as always...xo :)
4th Jul 2015 8:14pm
wow you out done yourself with this piece flowergirl... beautifully writen! definitely keeps me coming back to read more :D
5th Jul 2015 5:03am
Awe Magic.....you've made me blush......honored by the RL add on.....appreciate you much....glad you will be back.....thank you xo :)
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11th Jul 2015 4:17am
Again.....I consider this a highly honorable comment.....thank you for bringing a smile to my page tonight.....xo :)
13th Jul 2015 6:34pm
thanx i make u smile
i read urs all my while
but i am not
on ur friends list yet
read my softest latest posted just now ma'am
''''just a poetic love thought!''''
i read urs all my while
but i am not
on ur friends list yet
read my softest latest posted just now ma'am
''''just a poetic love thought!''''
14th Jul 2015 4:08am
Again......thank you......just read and commented on it......precious and touching piece......THANK YOU!!! xo :)
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 3:35am
"kissing us with their stunning colors " that and that Garden of Eden is a sure fire way to happiness.
4th Aug 2015 6:04am
