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Suave Edge
Seized by the ever so passionate caress of the dazzling nighttide
Underneath the sparkling twilight of the enchanted starlit skies
My ears were serenaded by the beloved sound of your voice
Carefree we journeyed deep into the after hours of midnight youth
With nothing but the cadence of our hearts swaying us along the edges
The intense spark of romance had swiftly become an airborne ecstasy
Driving the yearning desires crawling within us directly to the surface
Darling please rub my heart and tell me that you feel what I am feeling
This magnificent power that you bestowed by just a subtle hint of a whisper
Struck me with such a powerful impact making it hard for me to walk away
Underneath the sparkling twilight of the enchanted starlit skies
My ears were serenaded by the beloved sound of your voice
Carefree we journeyed deep into the after hours of midnight youth
With nothing but the cadence of our hearts swaying us along the edges
The intense spark of romance had swiftly become an airborne ecstasy
Driving the yearning desires crawling within us directly to the surface
Darling please rub my heart and tell me that you feel what I am feeling
This magnificent power that you bestowed by just a subtle hint of a whisper
Struck me with such a powerful impact making it hard for me to walk away
Published 31st May 2011
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Anonymous
31st May 2011 6:38am
Your words are fluid, Glenn. I was captured by your insight and surprised by the twist at the end. So well done!
31st May 2011 6:53am
