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The Saturday Morning Poem
The original brew at the crack of dawn
As I stare out into the concrete lawn
Two seconds later and after I yawn
I open the book and the world is gone
Troubled romances kill for each other
Devils and monsters in guise of a mother
Heroes await for adventure to smother
A human contemplates the life of another
Triumph is had at the cost of a friend
Life is lost, but that is not the end
As I reach beneath to find the trend
And discover myself from the authors pen
The stillness of the morning time
Installed with beeps and chatter and windy chime
With the ugly and waste and the grime
I still find that the world is mine
As I stare out into the concrete lawn
Two seconds later and after I yawn
I open the book and the world is gone
Troubled romances kill for each other
Devils and monsters in guise of a mother
Heroes await for adventure to smother
A human contemplates the life of another
Triumph is had at the cost of a friend
Life is lost, but that is not the end
As I reach beneath to find the trend
And discover myself from the authors pen
The stillness of the morning time
Installed with beeps and chatter and windy chime
With the ugly and waste and the grime
I still find that the world is mine
Published 27th Jun 2015
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27th Jun 2015 4:39pm
Can't quite let go of the damn thing myself. Great rhyming and flow here, nothing forced about it. Excellence!
28th Jun 2015 1:51pm
28th Jun 2015 7:36am
Awwww.. That resonates close! The world belongs to those of us who make it. Early morning is a good ritual time for flowing. A steady natural feeling ride. Good write on a universal topic.
28th Jun 2015 1:52pm
Indeed. I do as best as I can in regards to making it my own, regardless of whats in the way.
29th Jun 2015 3:57pm
"As I reach beneath to find the trend
And discover myself from the authors pen "
Deep lines, DPW. Nothing quite like discovery from the pen of another. It's what I live for. Loving this little piece....
And discover myself from the authors pen "
Deep lines, DPW. Nothing quite like discovery from the pen of another. It's what I live for. Loving this little piece....
30th Jun 2015 3:56am
I am glad you feel this way, VP. I look for myself in the authors I read. The more I identify with them, the more of their work I read.
