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StormSoul Eyes
I traipse 'tween violet corpses
whilst shadows strangle dawn.
Bold savior creeps in languid
storms crispen eyes forlorn.
Entombed in cloud spray azure
cracked clout pours as sea,
peri'n winkle splayed jewels
embrace purloin'd a'weep.
Blaze of thunder, stormsoul eyes
in charcoal splashed love letters,
none should serve, onus be mine
that we two partake this weather.
Hand on hand, turbulence fanned
storm enshrouds e'ry creviced bleed.
fashioned cobalt mend in watery rings
marbled lapis atone breath's defeat.
To stratosphere, head bent to void
reign stalks maniac passion at play.
Crystals shard, palette hued darks
stormsoul eyes drip midnight stain.
Indigo wish sunk in swirling bliss
feed me strong arms of everlast',
share solo aura, pleasure and pain
in stormsoul eyes.. my repertoire's caste.
Published 26th Jun 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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26th Jun 2015 7:45pm
sounds
like 'my' beach, but, then again,
uniquely
different....hmmmmm.....
a swell write ye done wrought
wright On & On, dear
26th Jun 2015 8:11pm
I shall re-right the wrought world, given chance!
Than you's ever much for takin' in the scenes m'dears!
Guilty much, I be.. of mushy moods today.
huggs 'n stuf
~d
Than you's ever much for takin' in the scenes m'dears!
Guilty much, I be.. of mushy moods today.
huggs 'n stuf
~d
26th Jun 2015 7:47pm
26th Jun 2015 8:14pm
sweet you!
luvz seein you here midst my mushins at weeks end,
hope ur weekend stifles in good ways darlin'!
smiles are yours,
~d
luvz seein you here midst my mushins at weeks end,
hope ur weekend stifles in good ways darlin'!
smiles are yours,
~d
26th Jun 2015 7:57pm
26th Jun 2015 8:16pm
and this poetic heart smothers you in grin fer
reading m'dear!
be good, you ;)
~d
reading m'dear!
be good, you ;)
~d
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26th Jun 2015 8:28pm
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26th Jun 2015 10:03pm
I am luvin sweet helzzz on you fer seein' what you did(perfectly too) in this!! *mwahs
seems I might have jumbled myself roy-yal lately..
sooo I will try not be weepy on you, but *know that
you are so dear, hence the "Sweet Taryn"..
alwys luvzu m'sis
~d
seems I might have jumbled myself roy-yal lately..
sooo I will try not be weepy on you, but *know that
you are so dear, hence the "Sweet Taryn"..
alwys luvzu m'sis
~d
We have always blended and meshed with ease..
mine? all greens & my somber violet (in poem)
it is I who should be thanking you, I love you
very much Michael! *adding pounce to ur sleep*
everly
~T
mine? all greens & my somber violet (in poem)
it is I who should be thanking you, I love you
very much Michael! *adding pounce to ur sleep*
everly
~T
27th Jun 2015 9:28am
oh deep waters this morning from you, darling sighs, how must one stay afloat in their own little espresso puddles...
"Hand on hand, turbulence fanned
storm enshrouds e'ry creviced
bleed.
fashioned cobalt mend in watery
rings
marbled lapis atone breath's defeat."
... achingly lovely shades of orgone glowing beneath your artistic touch
loved your blues
~ k
xo
"Hand on hand, turbulence fanned
storm enshrouds e'ry creviced
bleed.
fashioned cobalt mend in watery
rings
marbled lapis atone breath's defeat."
... achingly lovely shades of orgone glowing beneath your artistic touch
loved your blues
~ k
xo
27th Jun 2015 9:50am
you ever inspire, m'kitty-K!
read ur comment n then thought.. hmm "blues done right"..
here I go, bk to my memo pad (datin m'self, surely)
I lovzu soo so much fer always bein able to squeeze
n strangle grins from my every mood. <~~ powers!
mwahs on u, you hv heartspace all-times,
~d
read ur comment n then thought.. hmm "blues done right"..
here I go, bk to my memo pad (datin m'self, surely)
I lovzu soo so much fer always bein able to squeeze
n strangle grins from my every mood. <~~ powers!
mwahs on u, you hv heartspace all-times,
~d
18th Jul 2015 00:34am
Hues of blue viewed through the eyes of love is first thought that comes to mind..your metaphors are deep with meaning and fluid in conveyance...this is such a beautiful piece of writing D..
18th Jul 2015 2:25am
Aww,, spot-ON! ..thankies ever-so, sweet poet,
I was all about auras(his blues) here & love seein you stop in.
shiny nites to you ;) appreciated presence, bigg-time!
~d
I was all about auras(his blues) here & love seein you stop in.
shiny nites to you ;) appreciated presence, bigg-time!
~d
