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Near Death Experience
My city is all humor
She's nothing but a good time
And people get nervous
Looking for more
No longer human
Can't see the signs of life
Must be a near death experience
I used to know virtue
Revere the Greeks and Romans
One government at a time
My hands stay cold
No longer human
Can't see the signs of life
Must be a near death experience
Plastic outweighs guilt
Manmade hopes triumph overall
Devotion to new machines
That flips our blood
You gotta let me know
If we aren't denser
Then what are we fighting for
If we aren't denser
Then what are we fighting for
She's nothing but a good time
And people get nervous
Looking for more
No longer human
Can't see the signs of life
Must be a near death experience
I used to know virtue
Revere the Greeks and Romans
One government at a time
My hands stay cold
No longer human
Can't see the signs of life
Must be a near death experience
Plastic outweighs guilt
Manmade hopes triumph overall
Devotion to new machines
That flips our blood
You gotta let me know
If we aren't denser
Then what are we fighting for
If we aren't denser
Then what are we fighting for
Published 26th Jun 2015
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26th Jun 2015 4:31pm
"If we aren't denser
Then what are we fighting for"
~great lines here misterz..
trickle bold on page & 'cross mind, they do.
reminds of my "hard love" cassette(datin myself, surely) but has all rock bands singing broken
or healing, love songs. Great work, I hear acoustic amassed with this song o'yours.
peace to chaos
~d
Then what are we fighting for"
~great lines here misterz..
trickle bold on page & 'cross mind, they do.
reminds of my "hard love" cassette(datin myself, surely) but has all rock bands singing broken
or healing, love songs. Great work, I hear acoustic amassed with this song o'yours.
peace to chaos
~d
29th Sep 2015 7:13am
Dude, another great write again man.
This reminds me so much of a song going down a dive bomb and ending in a screaming and clean vocal duet.
Great vibes man
This reminds me so much of a song going down a dive bomb and ending in a screaming and clean vocal duet.
Great vibes man
