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Petal Luna
Pain shared is pain lessened
So feel free to let it bleed
Even parasites lose their grip
With the application of words
Presented with grace and precision
There's nothing you hide that can't be handled
By anyone watching you shine
So let those wicked times roll, baby
A crying shame can be a game
One that you'll win, eventually.
So feel free to let it bleed
Even parasites lose their grip
With the application of words
Presented with grace and precision
There's nothing you hide that can't be handled
By anyone watching you shine
So let those wicked times roll, baby
A crying shame can be a game
One that you'll win, eventually.
Published 24th Jun 2015
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2015 10:04pm
Ooooo......just my thoughts here......you know what that means....LOL!!! Screw those who judge and press on being yourself......it's the only way to be. Ok...how close am I.....or not at all.....as usual....LOL!! xo :)
26th Jun 2015 6:40pm
You're right on Flower. It's important to tell all, maybe carefully and with some entertainment value. Thanks.
24th Jun 2015 10:13pm
this a little different from you, yes? could just be my sleep deprivation fiddling nonconsensually with the tone of your musings though ltm...
"There's nothing you hide that can't be handled
By anyone watching you shine"
... one can live in hope
*
great write, crowfly
xo
"There's nothing you hide that can't be handled
By anyone watching you shine"
... one can live in hope
*
great write, crowfly
xo
26th Jun 2015 7:05pm
24th Jun 2015 10:29pm
Crow, you know how well I get this one. You just wrote it better than me, is all. Love this! Love you! Thank you for this-
26th Jun 2015 7:06pm
Anonymous
24th Jun 2015 10:46pm
Sir Crowfly, this poem speaks to me in ways you can't even begin to imagine. I am dully impressed!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
26th Jun 2015 7:07pm
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26th Jun 2015 7:08pm
Thank you Taryn. I try to listen to my own advice sometimes. But othertimes I'm just plain chicken.
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25th Jun 2015 11:24am
"Even parasites lose their grip
With the application of words"
Well stated. Great piece Crow.
With the application of words"
Well stated. Great piece Crow.
26th Jun 2015 7:11pm
25th Jun 2015 11:19pm
"Even parasites lose their grip
With the application of words
Presented with grace and precision "
Words are power, indeed, especially in the right hands. Enjoyed this.
Michael
With the application of words
Presented with grace and precision "
Words are power, indeed, especially in the right hands. Enjoyed this.
Michael
26th Jun 2015 7:12pm
26th Jun 2015 11:57pm
A breath of fresh air, haaa.. I received so much from this. Loved this a lot. Bowing
27th Jun 2015 1:04pm
There is a tenderness and caring in this poem. Like a true friend who sees beyond mistakes or moral virtues. But sees someone as they are and capitalizes on their strengths. Nice write Crow.
Anonymous
6th Jul 2015 11:23pm
this SPEAKS to me right now, crow. so much care in this poem. obviously for the target of the words, but the care in which you chose the words. very well done.
6th Aug 2015 7:09am
