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Scanners Pt. 0
The brain begins to vibrate
And walls shudder to the max
The door dropping of its hinges
And windows crack in shards
The toilet overflowing
And plumbing fit to burst
The phone ringing off the hook
And laptop flipping out
Flames rising from the carpet
And then the cat explodes
The neighbors fear and tremble
And forthwith call the cops
Who come armed with Glocks and fury
And this Scanner bites the dust.
To be continued...
And walls shudder to the max
The door dropping of its hinges
And windows crack in shards
The toilet overflowing
And plumbing fit to burst
The phone ringing off the hook
And laptop flipping out
Flames rising from the carpet
And then the cat explodes
The neighbors fear and tremble
And forthwith call the cops
Who come armed with Glocks and fury
And this Scanner bites the dust.
To be continued...
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Re: Scanners Pt. 0
22nd Jun 2015 00:07am
Interesting already!
I am excited to see more of this poem!
Keep up the good work.
I am excited to see more of this poem!
Keep up the good work.
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re: Re: Scanners Pt. 0
22nd Jun 2015 00:43am
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22nd Jun 2015 00:23am
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Thanks Sammy. Not sure there'll be one though. Depends on the profits. If this bombs the opening weekend then no dice. Of course there's the overseas markets to consider.
Re: Scanners Pt. 0
22nd Jun 2015 2:21am
Sweet Crow.....you're writes are always intriguing.....can't wait for next part.....xo :)
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22nd Jun 2015 2:32am
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22nd Jun 2015 2:33am
Personally I thinks it's a little pretentious but what do I know. Better luck next time.
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22nd Jun 2015 2:34am
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22nd Jun 2015 8:16am
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2015 12:32pm
clearly i missed some form of epic fucktardery in the comment section o.O
you are always drawing my attention to new places...
... look forward to the next installment of your thriller, crowman xo
you are always drawing my attention to new places...
... look forward to the next installment of your thriller, crowman xo

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