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Felt Your Hug
late night of darkness I was awakened
moon was gleaming extra bright
rain was tapping a song against a window
wind was furious howling its own rhythm
could hear them in unison singing my name
stepped outside as the moon went romantically dim
rain turned to a sexy mist of soft passionate kisses
gentle breeze warmly whirled around me
instantly felt your warm passionate hug.....
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
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moon was gleaming extra bright
rain was tapping a song against a window
wind was furious howling its own rhythm
could hear them in unison singing my name
stepped outside as the moon went romantically dim
rain turned to a sexy mist of soft passionate kisses
gentle breeze warmly whirled around me
instantly felt your warm passionate hug.....
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
Published 19th Jun 2015
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19th Jun 2015 8:37am
Flowergirl, luv ~ :-*
This is most marvelous. I rather adore this poem, luv. :-* I love rain and paired with the imagery you've presented -- Mmm...
This is awfully wonderful, luv. As soon as there's room in my list, in it goes. :-*
This is most marvelous. I rather adore this poem, luv. :-* I love rain and paired with the imagery you've presented -- Mmm...
This is awfully wonderful, luv. As soon as there's room in my list, in it goes. :-*
21st Jun 2015 4:08am
Awe Savaja.......I'm so honored you stopping by and leaving such kind words.......also for thought of being in your RL.....I'm so happy you enjoyed this.....thank you xo :)
19th Jun 2015 9:00am
21st Jun 2015 4:12am
Thank you schizodude for stopping by my way......your words have brought a smile upon my page......wishing you a beautiful day...xo :)
19th Jun 2015 11:08am
I love the imagery here. Storms carry with them great power but ny favorite is the silence when it has passed, Makes you believe anything is possible. Very enjoyable write!
21st Jun 2015 4:17am
Hi Zoe.....I used to be afraid of storms.....but now I see romance in them....so they don't scare me much now.....thank you for you pleasant feedback.......glad you enjoyed.....xo :)
19th Jun 2015 1:02pm
21st Jun 2015 4:19am
Hi Glen.....not good as sharing a donut and a drink with you in the bar.....LOL!!! xo :)
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21st Jun 2015 4:45am
Sweet S......I will take "stunning" on any write......that "one" word from such a talented and luved person as you.....is way above honor to me.....bowing back to you with respect and gratefulness to receive such words.....thank you xo :)
19th Jun 2015 6:03pm
You always have such a beautiful way with nature and the elements, Flower, rendering them romantic and at times erotic. All part of your style. Amazing!
Sweet Crow......you always have a way with comments......thank you for a bright smile on my page......I so appreciate your visits....I believe nature connects with our souls....all we have to do is listen to it.....xo :)
21st Jun 2015 2:13am
Enchanting flowergirl. It's been long since I've read a poem that changed my mood like yours did. Every line is perfect, every word serene
It is strange, I felt a warm hug
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece
It is strange, I felt a warm hug
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece
21st Jun 2015 4:57am
Your such a sweet soul......beautiful and enchanting words you leave me......sending many warm hugs your way.....honored by the RL add on......you've made my night.....thank you xo :)
21st Jun 2015 7:48pm
... darkness
tapping
howling ... rhythm
unison
warmly whirled
instantly felt ..."
Uh, Miss ES, I believe there is corrupting thoughts herein. ;)
I'm liking it a lot!
xo
C.
tapping
howling ... rhythm
unison
warmly whirled
instantly felt ..."
Uh, Miss ES, I believe there is corrupting thoughts herein. ;)
I'm liking it a lot!
xo
C.
22nd Jun 2015 1:23am
Hey Mr. ES.......I'm so glad you like.....I'm feeling strong corruptive thoughts from you.....sending more back your way.....xo :)
22nd Jun 2015 3:33pm
I felt a hug with this poem sweet flower.....I can see the calmness in a strom and I love how you expressed it here ; )
22nd Jun 2015 11:55pm
Awe Sexy Lena......you always bring a smile to my face......here's a special hug just for you......thank you xo :)
30th Jul 2015 4:36pm
wow what a great start of hot romance hehe... your imagery definitely set the mood... beautiful picture too... loved the ink! :D
31st Jul 2015 2:50am
Hi Magic.....your comments thrill me......glad you caught the mood.....I couldn't pass this pic up......just luv it......thank you for the smile you just brought upon my heart xo :)
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 3:40am
Ahhh . . . that "warm passionate hug." was worth waiting for.
4th Aug 2015 5:53am
