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I Forgive You
walking thru the silence of my soul
facing the pain it still holds
looking inside the strength of me
searching a way for me to feel peace
so I toss my heart in the wind
carrying a hug to you my friend
you'll always be a fond memory
but it's time to set this soul free
forgiveness I sincerely offer you
cause not forgiving only makes me blue
always will hold you in my prayers
cause you made me feel something so rare
I'm sure our paths will never cross again
so I wash my pain away in the fresh falling rain
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
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facing the pain it still holds
looking inside the strength of me
searching a way for me to feel peace
so I toss my heart in the wind
carrying a hug to you my friend
you'll always be a fond memory
but it's time to set this soul free
forgiveness I sincerely offer you
cause not forgiving only makes me blue
always will hold you in my prayers
cause you made me feel something so rare
I'm sure our paths will never cross again
so I wash my pain away in the fresh falling rain
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
Published 16th Jun 2015
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16th Jun 2015 6:01pm
18th Jun 2015 1:23am
Thank you Glen......your always a bright light on my page....you're so right.....xo :)
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Hi Sweet S......what beautiful words and thoughts you leave me.......forgiving is a part of stepping towards tomorrow......emptying the soul to smile in the future.....we should offer prayers.....cause we all need them.....luv and hugs xo :)
16th Jun 2015 8:14pm
That's a beautiful way to let go, maybe find some closure. "I wash my pain away in the fresh falling rain." Wow! I once wrote one that ends with "Hopes rise in the air / Fear dissolves in the rain." Rain does have healing properties! Great job Flower.
18th Jun 2015 1:32am
Thank you Crow.....always an honor to have your ink join me on my page......this is the first write I ever did in total rhyme.....LOL!!! I think all of nature has healing and luv inspiration.....all we have to do is look at its beauty and listen to its music......your write sounds awesome.....is it posted? Luv and hugs xo :)
Anonymous
16th Jun 2015 9:48pm
Miss Flower, I got to hand it to you, this is a beautiful stunning piece. You must've been feeling really spiritual at the time you wrote this piece because it shows from beginning to end;). . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin.
Hi Devin....always a thrill to see you!! High five my friend.....thank you for such great words to me......it felt really good to write.....always appreciate you....sending luv your way.....xo :)
Anonymous
16th Jun 2015 9:53pm
It's a difficult task to accomplish but the peace that follows makes it worth the effort. Excellent piece!
Hi Donovan......even if forgiveness isn't offered.....my conscience is clear.....no more tears......no regret.....just a memory I can settle with.....I know that my heart isn't hardened.....thank you for your insight on this.....xo :)
16th Jun 2015 10:29pm
18th Jun 2015 1:55am
Awe Sweet Smiles.....you're always such an encouragement .....thank you JW xo :)
17th Jun 2015 00:25am
18th Jun 2015 2:46am
Awe Hash......sharing tears with you......honored ny the RL add on.....luv and hugs to you xo :)
17th Jun 2015 5:21am
True peace and joy we will never know
until we forgive, move on, and let enmity go.
This little reminder has been in our family for decades.
ES, you penned it far better. I like this a lot!
xo
EV
until we forgive, move on, and let enmity go.
This little reminder has been in our family for decades.
ES, you penned it far better. I like this a lot!
xo
EV
18th Jun 2015 2:50am
Sweet EV......thank you so much for sharing those words to me....they are wise.....just as your corruptive mind is.....I'm glad you liked this.....MAUHHAHAHA!! xo :)
18th Jun 2015 00:31am
18th Jun 2015 2:56am
Hey Poet....its sad when special things in our lives end....when words are never shared again between souls......one walks away.....the other stays with hope of another hello.....finally I time when it doesn't come.....it's time to let hope go.....you have brought more thoughts to me.....thank you my sweet friend......xo :)
10th Jul 2015 3:54am
forgive.. forget.. but never loose hope.!
hope brings dreams, dreams fuel life;
hope brings dreams, dreams fuel life;
11th Jul 2015 2:29am
My friend.....what wonderful words you share with me......thank you......xo :)
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 3:42am
Oh, you seem to cast a lot of lovers aside. I'm sure they were responsible of being dumped however.
4th Aug 2015 6:12am
Well Scooter......there's a story with this one.....it's buried now deep within......I had to forgive this soul to for mine to let go and walk away totally.....forgiving is a way of healing yourself......xo :)
