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Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
Coffee,
peach vodka
and green tea,
a beer
in the shower
and me
drifting out
to the middle
of the sea
floating on
the tip of a pen
and weed;
a journey
to claim
my destiny.
peach vodka
and green tea,
a beer
in the shower
and me
drifting out
to the middle
of the sea
floating on
the tip of a pen
and weed;
a journey
to claim
my destiny.
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Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 00:02am
I remember reading, metaphorically speaking of course, that a maelstrom perfectly symbolizes that, within a cyclone of chaos, the center is absolutely calm. And from that point is optimal for observing patterns. This is a nice write. Coffee, vodka and tea, huh? Is that one drink?
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re: Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 4:40pm
haha They were written as a list, but upon retrospect, they might go well together. I'll try most anything once. haha
Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 3:13am
Sounds like this poet is drifting away to Margaritaville.
Entertaining write.
Entertaining write.
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re: Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 4:37pm
Thanks Snugglebuck! Margaritaville is a nice place to make friends, even if only with ones own self. haha
Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
Anonymous
15th Jun 2015 10:13am
russian that i am, i'm more curious about this peach vodka abomination than i am about anything else ltm

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re: Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 4:38pm
Oh gag. haha Although...now that I think about it...those COULD go together, perhaps. Maybe I will try it sometime and let you know. haha.
Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 12:05pm
I almost got a divorce after to drinking too much peach vodka.
My wife claims I became a demon, more so than usual ...
My wife claims I became a demon, more so than usual ...
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re: Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 4:35pm
Substances only accentuate who you already are...sometimes fully releasing the demons we control so well otherwise.
This is kind of an older poem, I am finding a lot of older stuff I have written in my phone, so I want to make sure I post what I missed. haha
Anyway, this was a cry for help with creativity, and perhaps to put some demons to sleep. Either way, it must have worked. I can't remember writing this. haha
This is kind of an older poem, I am finding a lot of older stuff I have written in my phone, so I want to make sure I post what I missed. haha
Anyway, this was a cry for help with creativity, and perhaps to put some demons to sleep. Either way, it must have worked. I can't remember writing this. haha
Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 4:31pm
Coffee, beer, green tea, peach vodka and weed. Everything a man might need. Maybe a co-conspirator to share it with. Nice job Sammy!
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re: Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
15th Jun 2015 4:58pm
Re: Day drinking in the suburbs (an exploration for motivation)
Enjoyed the read sammy...
Those days alone...hoping to stimulate the creativity...
Though I'd give the peach vodka a miss....love a margarita...hmmm... :)
Those days alone...hoping to stimulate the creativity...
Though I'd give the peach vodka a miss....love a margarita...hmmm... :)
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