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The Cards on the Table
"Just four points
are all I want
to make,"
she said.
One:
I have nothing
to give
but myself,
and for
that reason
I must choose
to give or not.
Two:
There are billions
of stars
in the sky
but none
are repeated,
and just so,
I am unique
and must be treated so.
Three:
Dance wherever you wish,
but when you are
with me,
be with me alone
in every facet
and texture
of the complex context.
Four:
I am owned
of myself,
and yet
I lend myself
to you
because you
have earned
the right;
do not throw that away.
are all I want
to make,"
she said.
One:
I have nothing
to give
but myself,
and for
that reason
I must choose
to give or not.
Two:
There are billions
of stars
in the sky
but none
are repeated,
and just so,
I am unique
and must be treated so.
Three:
Dance wherever you wish,
but when you are
with me,
be with me alone
in every facet
and texture
of the complex context.
Four:
I am owned
of myself,
and yet
I lend myself
to you
because you
have earned
the right;
do not throw that away.
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11th Jun 2015 5:28pm
Negotiations that are deeply made are meant to be deeply felt....how fortunate are you!
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2015 12:29pm
"I am owned
of myself,
and yet
I lend myself
to you
because you
have earned
the right;
do not throw that away."
^^^^^^
this. so much of this, Sir. loveeeee love loved!
of myself,
and yet
I lend myself
to you
because you
have earned
the right;
do not throw that away."
^^^^^^
this. so much of this, Sir. loveeeee love loved!
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11th Jun 2015 5:31pm
The ecology of love, the sense of surrender, the taste of the earned, the note that sings itself....we must listen as if our lives depend on it.....for our inner lives do! Or else, read'em and weep! Thanks, katja.
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11th Jun 2015 9:14pm
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12th Jun 2015 4:45pm
How many times would you allow a Siren to ask you how much you love her?
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11th Jun 2015 9:17pm
OMG! This is perfect and should be the mantra of every woman alive. It should be carved into every girl's school book and repeated like the pledge in adolescence.
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11th Jun 2015 9:25pm
Echo Ahvati. In short "I can be yours but treat me with respect, I am still my own person." Verse four has strongest resonance, imagining it being said to me.
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11th Jun 2015 11:46pm
Ahhh, runningturtle87, luv ~ :-*
This is truly an extraordinarily excellent piece. It provokes deep thought as it evokes immediate visceral response. Good art, excellent art, supernal art does that. :-*
This is truly an extraordinarily excellent piece. It provokes deep thought as it evokes immediate visceral response. Good art, excellent art, supernal art does that. :-*
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