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I Still Miss You
Nine years ago I lost you
And I still cry over you
You were the one man
Who always protected me
You'd grab me and hug me
Pick me up and twirl me
Once you sat me down
Handed me a blank piece of paper
And demanded that I write
Why I did what I did
You made me question
You made me learn
You were the father
I wish mine were
And I still cry over you
You were the one man
Who always protected me
You'd grab me and hug me
Pick me up and twirl me
Once you sat me down
Handed me a blank piece of paper
And demanded that I write
Why I did what I did
You made me question
You made me learn
You were the father
I wish mine were
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Re: I Still Miss You
11th Jun 2015 6:45am
Great writing skills. Love the way this poem emits so much so much emotion to the one who reads it.
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