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Love To
Love to go all night
making sounds so sweet
if you are hungry
sample my specially flavored meat
can be satisfying but calories are low
you can vary the speeds
go both fast and SLOW
the style giving an individual charm
arousal starts in watching the walk
fully blown erection
by the time the start of talk
my imagination wonders
to naughty pleas you send to my ear
not another substance needed
so put away the weed and beer
keep the heels on if you are so inclined
savor the flow that couldn't be held BACK
by the time of that event
subtlety is what I will so lack!
making sounds so sweet
if you are hungry
sample my specially flavored meat
can be satisfying but calories are low
you can vary the speeds
go both fast and SLOW
the style giving an individual charm
arousal starts in watching the walk
fully blown erection
by the time the start of talk
my imagination wonders
to naughty pleas you send to my ear
not another substance needed
so put away the weed and beer
keep the heels on if you are so inclined
savor the flow that couldn't be held BACK
by the time of that event
subtlety is what I will so lack!
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Re: Love To
8th Jun 2015 2:11pm
I especially like the ending of this poem. It has an impact. And you speak the truth. This is not a subtle poem.
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8th Jun 2015 3:03pm
Re: Love To
8th Jun 2015 3:18pm
re: Re: Love To
8th Jun 2015 7:59pm
inspiration can be rather unexpected---the story goes that McCartney's "Yesterday" was original titled "Scrambled Eggs".
Thanks for the read
Thanks for the read
Re: Love To
Anonymous
8th Jun 2015 3:42pm
ooh smoothjazz, this makes me wanna purr...
... there's a time and place for subtlety, this wasn't it ;)
... there's a time and place for subtlety, this wasn't it ;)
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re: Re: Love To
just the "kat" in you?
Time isn't usually an issue for me, but rather the place!
Time isn't usually an issue for me, but rather the place!
Re: Love To
8th Jun 2015 4:15pm
Re: Love To
8th Jun 2015 8:36pm
"can be satisfying but calories are low"
~protein has those x few to count ;) eg
Steamy write of insatiable needs mista, enjoyed!
be wellz
~d
~protein has those x few to count ;) eg
Steamy write of insatiable needs mista, enjoyed!
be wellz
~d
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re: Re: Love To
8th Jun 2015 9:46pm
from what I read the protein count is indeed high but still not enough to fulfill a person's daily requirement!
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8th Jun 2015 8:39pm
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re: Re: Love To
8th Jun 2015 9:48pm
when I was an undergrad I meet a old-timer in Santa Barbara that had some very unorthodox methods of healing...
Re: Love To
oooh, boy; I tell ya . . .get a room!
Check, please; gotta go!!!
This is primo shit, Jazz.
Green
Check, please; gotta go!!!
This is primo shit, Jazz.
Green
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I'm feeling you on the real vs. imagination tip, for I am the Queen of Imagery Kingdom! You can be sure that I'll be trekking into yours on the reg.
Green
Green
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11th Jun 2015 2:09am
oh mine may every now and then be an adventure but rarely violent. I say rarely because sometimes I do write about the violence humanity inflicts on others in a political/societal context.
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13th Jun 2015 00:19am