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To write the night away
It's all the 2's
on a twenty-four clock
with a long way to go.
Roaring meg is just
another beer
-one of many.
The bars are out
of bounds...
Not a problem:
I have the Delta Blues
at my disposable
and a gruff voice
to follow it along.
Sing a song for me;
keep it quiet,
while I exhale stratus,
so that I can lean in
to catch the breath
against my ear.
There's a long way to go,
but it's going.
on a twenty-four clock
with a long way to go.
Roaring meg is just
another beer
-one of many.
The bars are out
of bounds...
Not a problem:
I have the Delta Blues
at my disposable
and a gruff voice
to follow it along.
Sing a song for me;
keep it quiet,
while I exhale stratus,
so that I can lean in
to catch the breath
against my ear.
There's a long way to go,
but it's going.
Published 27th May 2011
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28th May 2011 3:14am
I like the drift of this piece. A smooth simple insight to those kind of nights.. I'm raising my glass to this.
Anonymous
29th May 2011 9:52pm
This opens and closes with some clever wordplay, perfectly encasing the monotone introspection which characterises your work. A nicely formed, intelligent piece. Just one question: "Roaring meg"? Who's Meg and why isn't her name capitalised?
29th May 2011 9:59pm
It's a fine ale, and the strongest you can buy in the morrisons 4 for £5.50 range! Thank you sir.
Anonymous
29th May 2011 10:04pm
I had a feeling it was something like that. I should really develop a taste for the creature.
2nd Jun 2011 3:20pm
3rd Jun 2011 11:58pm
This poem is lyrical and easy flowing. Great job at showing and not telling. It's a topic we can all relate to which is great.
