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A Red Morning Rain
I woke to fallen embers
outside my window
and the smell of the rain
looking for memory,
looking for the reason
I was led astray, unsettled,
I passed a woman in thought,
she reminded me of ignorance
and meaningfulness of suffering,
taken aback, time tempered the pain
and it escaped me, I let it go,
the fire burns to a residue of wisdom
some ninety-odd million miles away
falls the color of a crimson atmosphere,
in the sweetness of a gentle rain.
outside my window
and the smell of the rain
looking for memory,
looking for the reason
I was led astray, unsettled,
I passed a woman in thought,
she reminded me of ignorance
and meaningfulness of suffering,
taken aback, time tempered the pain
and it escaped me, I let it go,
the fire burns to a residue of wisdom
some ninety-odd million miles away
falls the color of a crimson atmosphere,
in the sweetness of a gentle rain.
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Re: A Red Morning Rain
6th Jun 2015 6:59am
Pishashee, luv ~ :-*
You have such a gentle, melodious way with words seductively easing into the crevasses of one's mind imparting wisdom like droplets of mother's milk: that liquid gold rife with antiviral and antibacterial properties, capable of healing so much, luv. Nearly anything.
Just as your words are... :-*
You have such a gentle, melodious way with words seductively easing into the crevasses of one's mind imparting wisdom like droplets of mother's milk: that liquid gold rife with antiviral and antibacterial properties, capable of healing so much, luv. Nearly anything.
Just as your words are... :-*
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re: Re: A Red Morning Rain
7th Jun 2015 7:11am
"antiviral and antibacterial properties" My hero :) You're wonderful, thank you.
Re: A Red Morning Rain
6th Jun 2015 8:30am
certainly a time of reflection. I imagine it's hard to resist going where the rain leads you...
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re: Re: A Red Morning Rain
7th Jun 2015 7:35am
Rolling on the river mostly. :) The rains come and go, such as the pain and happiness. Thank you, John, always a pleasure.
Re: A Red Morning Rain
6th Jun 2015 11:13am
re: Re: A Red Morning Rain
7th Jun 2015 7:17am
"I know, shinin'
down like water.
I want to know,
have you ever
seen the rain
comin' down on
a sunny day?" :)
down like water.
I want to know,
have you ever
seen the rain
comin' down on
a sunny day?" :)
Re: A Red Morning Rain
6th Jun 2015 12:30pm
re: Re: A Red Morning Rain
7th Jun 2015 7:20am
Fish in a barrel my friend, fish in a barrel. :)Thank you so much, Dan, and for the add.
Re: A Red Morning Rain
6th Jun 2015 5:03pm
and the smell of the rain
looking for memory,
looking for the reason
Beautiful rumination; a Spring rain of words. Perfect image as well.
looking for memory,
looking for the reason
Beautiful rumination; a Spring rain of words. Perfect image as well.
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re: Re: A Red Morning Rain
I think that I was lucky enough to catch myself at about half-past five am, under the rainbow's edge that was glistening red. It was perfect like that for about 5 minutes. Thank you so much. :)
Re: A Red Morning Rain
7th Jun 2015 2:49pm
I loved "and it escaped me, I let it go,
the fire burns to a residue of wisdom"
Has the alchemical formulas written within. And how you ended it made this both a transient moment of thought and a connection from another place and time.
Excellent!
the fire burns to a residue of wisdom"
Has the alchemical formulas written within. And how you ended it made this both a transient moment of thought and a connection from another place and time.
Excellent!
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I couldn't thank you enough. I really appreciate this. :) Thanks for the add.
Re: A Red Morning Rain
10th Jun 2015 5:00pm
I felt the mist falling on me, this is a soothing to the soul mind & heart. Your visual always make my mind drift within the ponders of you. Greatly felt
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11th Jun 2015 8:16am
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13th Jun 2015 4:06am