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Distracting Chat Haiku
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Distracting Chat Haiku
Fuck! But I meant to
Only play with your hair now
Then somehow massaged...
Written by
LokiOfLiterati
Published
4th Jun 2015
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Re: Distracting Chat Haiku
theskinnyone
4th Jun 2015 10:29am
you might want to include what you massaged.a little short.
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re: Re: Distracting Chat Haiku
LokiOfLiterati
4th Jun 2015 1:16pm
Oh it's brief, but Haiku by definition is 3 lines, 5 syllables, then 7 syllables, then 5 syllables. So I had to keep the story compact, a glimpse.
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Re: Distracting Chat Haiku
crowfly
4th Jun 2015 9:05pm
Sounds like a seduction Loki. One thing leads to another. That massage will turn to a....
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re: Re: Distracting Chat Haiku
LokiOfLiterati
10th Jun 2015 3:54am
Oh I'm working on a Distracting Chat Haiku series after that comment! It occurred to me an entire love story could be told in scenes that way.
Thanks for the inspiration, crowfly!
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Re: Distracting Chat Haiku
drunkenplaywords
6th Jun 2015 2:24pm
There is lots of hair to play with if they don't shave. I like the ending. It let me tell the story.
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re: Re: Distracting Chat Haiku
LokiOfLiterati
10th Jun 2015 3:55am
I wasn't sure if ANYONE would call out that interpretation... so damn, thank you for being the first!
And you know what I mean, huh? Let the audience ride it. It's their imagination. The creator's job is just to open the door.
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