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Always his (Sub or Dom competition)
Wilting under his being,
bodies close and touching.
His every desire
my loyal promise;
every lustful word
engraved into my flesh,
an eternal reminder
that I am his.
bodies close and touching.
His every desire
my loyal promise;
every lustful word
engraved into my flesh,
an eternal reminder
that I am his.
Published 28th May 2015
| Edited 29th May 2015
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29th May 2015 10:35am
Very nice expression of your willingness to serve and please. Both are so important to be a good sub. I'm sure your Master must be pleased.
29th May 2015 12:40pm
I am a sub but this poem is theoretical I would imagine they would be luckily ;) Lol
Thank you Zoe :3
Thank you Zoe :3
29th May 2015 3:36pm
suggested line breaks - this is just the way I would write this - I really love this poem - I am just not sure that the current line breaks do it justice :-)
Wilting under his being,
bodies close and touching.
His every desire
my loyal promise;
every lustful word
engraved into my flesh,
an eternal reminder
that I am his.
Wilting under his being,
bodies close and touching.
His every desire
my loyal promise;
every lustful word
engraved into my flesh,
an eternal reminder
that I am his.
29th May 2015 11:49pm
Actually I prefer your line breaks I'll get on to that thank you David :3
