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Cradled and Deep
Bring me to my knees
with hot firmness,
Whisper warm kisses
up my body,
until we are eye to eye
hip to hip,
burning
moist skin aware.
Your back a canvas
of my pleasure-
To feel you drink me
complete me,
Mold me soft
to penetrate hard-
slow slickness
our tide.
You stretching me
from inside.
Breath at my ear,
you are deep
so deep,
nestled in squeeze
Holdin' you tight-
I buck
and I bite-
in messy play fight.
sucking passion
from between us
in tangled sheet war
Spill heavy darlin'
as I cradle you
Still deep
and tight
still mine.
Published 28th May 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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28th May 2015 5:21am
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28th May 2015 8:45pm
You are so very sweet!
With your hot-writes, I am always warmed that you enjoyed ;)
be good gf
~d
With your hot-writes, I am always warmed that you enjoyed ;)
be good gf
~d
28th May 2015 5:47am
OMG!OH MY GOD!!
U are so fresh! I just adore you !!!
Breath at my ear,
you are deep
so deep,
nestled in squeeze
So sexy love this ink
Zazzles xoxox
U are so fresh! I just adore you !!!
Breath at my ear,
you are deep
so deep,
nestled in squeeze
So sexy love this ink
Zazzles xoxox
28th May 2015 8:51pm
The you-voice, that I hear in my head-
(crazy much-yes.) is adorable..your comments
always hold so much energy- and I can't fight
the smile.
Always thanks, for your support (sis-hug there)
laters cute stuff ;)
~d
(crazy much-yes.) is adorable..your comments
always hold so much energy- and I can't fight
the smile.
Always thanks, for your support (sis-hug there)
laters cute stuff ;)
~d
28th May 2015 10:17pm
28th May 2015 6:57am
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Anonymous
28th May 2015 11:56am
*clutching my pearls and fanning myself*
day'um lady this is red hot ...
... a wonderfully paced ride [read] from start to finish
day'um lady this is red hot ...
... a wonderfully paced ride [read] from start to finish
28th May 2015 9:02pm
*fits of giggle here!
your modesty indeed..
(*ducks the swack she knows is comin')
I adore your gracing of my pages (naughty & nice) and could not do without those grins and wit!
Thank-you's all over the place lady!
~d
your modesty indeed..
(*ducks the swack she knows is comin')
I adore your gracing of my pages (naughty & nice) and could not do without those grins and wit!
Thank-you's all over the place lady!
~d
28th May 2015 11:58am
I am in love with your imagery... I can see you stretching on the inside and feel your bucks and bites... hot stuff burns at the end of your pen!!! jj
28th May 2015 9:09pm
There you go making a sexy poem out of your comment again! *hot-pant for sure! (ty)
For that imagery, you paint with a steamy brush- all your own, soo glad to be getting my point across, luv ;)
be very good
~d
For that imagery, you paint with a steamy brush- all your own, soo glad to be getting my point across, luv ;)
be very good
~d
28th May 2015 10:02pm
If you sift through my haystack of poetry, you will find at least a dozen, probably more, of erotic poems. They get lost in the pile of pages here, but I write plenty a sexy poem out of the alphabet in words... jj
I will stir up trouble, fast as I can (mr-so-many-pages..*G's)
so worth it...thank you ;)
~d
so worth it...thank you ;)
~d
29th May 2015 1:25am
Well after 35 years of writing poetry, I ought to have a haystack... lol! jj
29th May 2015 11:10pm
nice job here, lady
there's a really nice dance flowing and with the couple of rhymes it makes the read a pleasure.
good stuff, keep shinnin'
there's a really nice dance flowing and with the couple of rhymes it makes the read a pleasure.
good stuff, keep shinnin'
29th May 2015 11:36pm
Thanks ever so sweetly, for
joining the dance!
Wud not rock without you..
take care ;)
~d
joining the dance!
Wud not rock without you..
take care ;)
~d
