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Sensation
Taste tapping on tongues
allow me to shed my skin
Let us be shadows
Let us be shapes
Licking my milk as it
streams down from inner thigh
Let us be liquid
Let us be rain
Words whispered tickle
like feathers on flesh
Let us be drenched
Let us be leaking
Lovely bones sweet with sweat
allow you to wither inside
allow me to shed my skin
Let us be shadows
Let us be shapes
Licking my milk as it
streams down from inner thigh
Let us be liquid
Let us be rain
Words whispered tickle
like feathers on flesh
Let us be drenched
Let us be leaking
Lovely bones sweet with sweat
allow you to wither inside
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Re: Sensation
27th May 2015 3:56pm
Tommie, this piece is beautiful. You paint such a lush, naturally sensual picture...bravisima!
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27th May 2015 6:38pm
My erection is lasting more than 4 hours, hence no withering
awesome ink T
awesome ink T
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27th May 2015 8:30pm
I may wither inside but my fluids are replenished. Thanks for this sensational write Tommie!
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