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Fall of Love
The young couple
Infatuated
Finds joy in each glance and touch
Falling in
Love
Live unhappy in commitment of much
Infatuated
Finds joy in each glance and touch
Falling in
Love
Live unhappy in commitment of much
Published 16th May 2015
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Anonymous
16th May 2015 9:50pm
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17th May 2015 00:37am
Anonymous
16th May 2015 10:16pm
that last line is an indictment on the institution of marriage/commitment. but not everyone lives unhappily ever after.
you say much in such a few words.
you say much in such a few words.
17th May 2015 00:01am
I appreciate your sincerity. The key seems to be treating the commitment as a gift of long lived infatuation and not a collection of responsibilities to one another.
