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The Turn
I wish to sink my toes
in the turn, and folds of soil
unknown.
Perhaps, where gravity yields
hinging stones,
and roots are left exposed.
Where memory hasn't
a glimpse,
to lean against, nor hold.
Distant, and adrift
as the quiet hush of dawn.
Will it be a soft, muddied marsh,
heady and thick,
or in a grey October mist?
This I suffer to know.
Will there be beauty there,
distilled, and lingering -
Hiding in the allusive turn?
A place where magnolias bloom,
to mimic the Moon?
For this place unknown,
I do so long -
to go.
Wait.
Is this truly what I seek?
To place my feet
within the maze of twisting turns,
lit by strange hues of orange.
Or is it really a need
to climb the crown of foreign ground
merely to breathe the sweet scent of you?
© 2015 blue angel
Published 15th May 2015
| Edited 13th Sep 2015
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15th May 2015 11:41pm
Blue, this is a peaceful, spiritual feast. The ending is beautiful...the idea that one can find the fulfillment of all of one's yearnings in the soul of another is a beautiful thing.
15th May 2015 11:45pm
Yes, it is, and not selfish to want to touch so deeply in the depths of another. Thank you for such lovely thoughts!
16th May 2015 00:11am
16th May 2015 00:37am
To me this indicates the willingness to travel to parts unknown, which can be either thrilling or frightening, to be with the one you love. Takes courage and devotion. Loved this Blue Angel.
16th May 2015 1:19am
Indeed, the unknown can be thrilling, and frightening. Thank you deeply for sharing your thoughts.
16th May 2015 1:13am
spectacular, Angel. there is beauty here, & there will be beauty there, wherever you journey. I'll be searching for you at that same turn of the road...
16th May 2015 1:22am
I'll be searching those shadows to find you. Your words make me blush, thank you immensely for them. :)
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17th May 2015 00:56am
The need should be explored, and I believe she's willing to go the distance. Thank you for reading!
23rd May 2015 6:39am
The longing for the unknown and the need to be known expressed beautifully...
26th May 2015 2:52am
Brilliant imagery with an ending of subtle eroticism. Very much enjoyed the vivid read! jj
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26th Jun 2015 7:42pm
Our needs and wants, some times the the blurry lines of each bring us on the unknown journey to find whats around each corner? This truly makes me think of my nest backpacking trip in to lands unknown, where I find my greatest spiritual peace and wonderful people! thank you
1st Sep 2015 00:23am
Ethereal and innocent. A beautiful place the mind hold dear to her heart...a fantasy that triumphs over reality.
2nd Sep 2015 2:39pm
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11th Sep 2015 3:51pm
Tis true dear Taryn. It's more of view upon a place where no memories have been made yet, good or bad, a place of newness. Thank you deeply for visiting my poetry. With the utmost sincerity, blue angel
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