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Empty Me...
Take me...
into your hot moist hole
swallow me
to the base, whole
slobber 'pon the muscled snake
lovingly, eat me like cake
stroke the length, lip lock
this meaty cock
n' suck free my molten soul...
into your hot moist hole
swallow me
to the base, whole
slobber 'pon the muscled snake
lovingly, eat me like cake
stroke the length, lip lock
this meaty cock
n' suck free my molten soul...
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Re: Empty Me...
Anonymous
15th May 2015 1:18pm
i'm sorry but what were you saying to me earlier? lol
day'um papi
day'um papi
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re: Re: Empty Me...
15th May 2015 1:30pm
Lol well I was thinking bout YOU! sooooooo lol
Thank u my sweet n endearing Mami :)
Thank u my sweet n endearing Mami :)
Re: Empty Me...
16th May 2015 11:56pm
re: Re: Empty Me...
17th May 2015 1:36am
Lol that's an interesting way to see it bro. thank u, I'm grateful as always for support n kindness :)
Re: Empty Me...
Love the whole poem but
especially the last line ...
since itīs so compelling.
especially the last line ...
since itīs so compelling.
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re: Re: Empty Me...
19th May 2015 3:34am
Re: Empty Me...
24th May 2015 3:27am
Normally, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
I eschew snakes and references to them. I certainly do not tend to find them erotically compelling. (I do recognize this may be rather anomalous. Ah well.;-p)
My point (and I DO have one here) is that regardless, you've had a rather devastatingly sensual impact here.
Yet. Again.
All I can really think at this point is feed me. ;-*
I eschew snakes and references to them. I certainly do not tend to find them erotically compelling. (I do recognize this may be rather anomalous. Ah well.;-p)
My point (and I DO have one here) is that regardless, you've had a rather devastatingly sensual impact here.
Yet. Again.
All I can really think at this point is feed me. ;-*
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re: Re: Empty Me...
24th May 2015 12:30pm
Aaaaawwww thank you n well it's wonderful to see u can
adjust to a different 'view' of a 'snake' lol
N yea, open up my dear n 'bone-appetit'
Lmao
adjust to a different 'view' of a 'snake' lol
N yea, open up my dear n 'bone-appetit'
Lmao
Re: Empty Me...
26th May 2015 3:18pm
I can definitley see how clever you are by using few words to create a good appetite ; )
Love the title by the way
Love the title by the way
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re: Re: Empty Me...
19th Jun 2015 9:42pm
Thank u my sweetheart, been awhile since I last heard from u, happy for ur return! :)
Re: Empty Me...
19th Jun 2015 6:56pm
And I'm s'pozin ud like *open-flies wif that?
Great heat man, and not a word-drop wasted,
very much enjoyed the read of you..
be wellz or write smutties ;)
~d
Great heat man, and not a word-drop wasted,
very much enjoyed the read of you..
be wellz or write smutties ;)
~d
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re: Re: Empty Me...
19th Jun 2015 10:55pm
Lmao yes I would n yes I am n do happily lol
Thank u my friend, happy to hear you liked n appreciate u much :)
Thank u my friend, happy to hear you liked n appreciate u much :)
Re. Empty Me...
7th Oct 2015 2:20pm
Re: Re. Empty Me...
7th Oct 2015 4:18pm
AGAIN, a VERY lucky ass dude!! lol
Me? Guess I will say thanks once more n go somewhere n cry lol...
Truly appreciate your feedback on my ink :)
Me? Guess I will say thanks once more n go somewhere n cry lol...
Truly appreciate your feedback on my ink :)