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5/14/15 ~ One Year
Your light went out
but you still shine
brightly in my memory
You suffered with pain
staying strong in
every way
You lost loves
but never lost love
always keeping it in your bones
Your eye's are in daisies
while your voice is in
the warm wind
You became the earth
but met the sky all
at once
You must be raising hell
in heaven, save some
fun when we meet again
but you still shine
brightly in my memory
You suffered with pain
staying strong in
every way
You lost loves
but never lost love
always keeping it in your bones
Your eye's are in daisies
while your voice is in
the warm wind
You became the earth
but met the sky all
at once
You must be raising hell
in heaven, save some
fun when we meet again
Published 14th May 2015
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14th May 2015 4:15am
Amazing tribute
Sorry for your loss
But
Glad you came back here to honor your friend
Sorry for your loss
But
Glad you came back here to honor your friend
15th May 2015 1:50am
Tommie, I am so moved by this tender and yet powerful expression of love and devotion to your friend. I am elated that you keep her alive in your memory.
This stanza teaches me volumes about your friend's personalty and outlook on life:
"You lost loves
but never lost love
always keeping it in your bones"
Absolutely beautiful! I now raise my glass to your friend and her legacy of love!
This stanza teaches me volumes about your friend's personalty and outlook on life:
"You lost loves
but never lost love
always keeping it in your bones"
Absolutely beautiful! I now raise my glass to your friend and her legacy of love!
15th May 2015 1:53am
She had a hard life,never making excuses for
anything. She lived fast,lost people most
precious to her,and suffered more than
any human should have to. Thank you GW :)
anything. She lived fast,lost people most
precious to her,and suffered more than
any human should have to. Thank you GW :)
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14th May 2015 9:42pm
This is a wonderful tribute Tommie. Refreshing how you hint at the fun side to Heaven! Nothing but clouds and pearly gates would probably be a bore.
15th May 2015 1:57am
Haha...if that's all that's there she would say,"Take me straight to hell!" She was all about a good time. Thank you crowfly :)
Anonymous
15th May 2015 5:22am
mindful and beautiful poem.
15th May 2015 9:17pm
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