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SHADES
Times are bad and people get crazy
so be at someone's vicinity
Do not dwell alone
In the lonesome places
Where shades are lurking
Ready to consume you all
death can ambush you from it
You be the Tragedy of your own
Evidence not found
Witness unknown
No justice in this world
Neither in the world between
For Your soul may dwell
Like a lonely traveller in barren land
Quench for bicker of hope
Till it's broken my series of mirages
so be at someone's vicinity
Do not dwell alone
In the lonesome places
Where shades are lurking
Ready to consume you all
death can ambush you from it
You be the Tragedy of your own
Evidence not found
Witness unknown
No justice in this world
Neither in the world between
For Your soul may dwell
Like a lonely traveller in barren land
Quench for bicker of hope
Till it's broken my series of mirages
Published 14th May 2015
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4th Sep 2016 6:06am
Being lonely happens whether a person is alone or surrounded by others. It arises from a lack of fulfillment. Not sure I understood your poem. Might consider a rewrite. :)
