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Hush Now & Be Still....
put your hand upon my breast
can you....
.....feel it....
.....feel me....
.....feel you....
.....feel us....
can you feel it....
luv that has blossomed from a sweet "Hello!"
beautifully unfolding petals of a sacred rose
can you feel me.....
a soul passionately yours to explore
who's spirit is connected one with yours
can you feel you.....
it's not just my heart you feel within me
it's yours with mine beating as one
can you feel us.....
two souls brought together across the ocean
beautiful purple rose of passion symbolizing our luv
kiss me goodnight
close your eyes and hold me
in the darkness as our dreams collide
feel it....me....you....us....
hush now & be still
Copyright © 2015 flowergirl
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can you....
.....feel it....
.....feel me....
.....feel you....
.....feel us....
can you feel it....
luv that has blossomed from a sweet "Hello!"
beautifully unfolding petals of a sacred rose
can you feel me.....
a soul passionately yours to explore
who's spirit is connected one with yours
can you feel you.....
it's not just my heart you feel within me
it's yours with mine beating as one
can you feel us.....
two souls brought together across the ocean
beautiful purple rose of passion symbolizing our luv
kiss me goodnight
close your eyes and hold me
in the darkness as our dreams collide
feel it....me....you....us....
hush now & be still
Copyright © 2015 flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
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Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
13th May 2015 10:55pm
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14th May 2015 2:15am
Welcome to DU!! Thank you for stopping by my way.......happy to have made your day.....xo :)
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13th May 2015 11:08pm
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14th May 2015 2:17am
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14th May 2015 1:43am
I thought this was going to be fully erotic with that first line, but that's just me. My bad. This is romantic and beautiful, Flower, almost like a lullaby. An introduction to sweet dreams. See you there!
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re: Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
14th May 2015 2:21am
Um....now Crow.....I must confess I like how you think.....LOL!! Glad you liked this piece......see ya in dream world.....zzzzzzz.....xo :)
Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
14th May 2015 4:57am
"feel it, feel me, feel you ...."
Duh! Of course! Don't be silly! :D
Luvin this work of tender erotica, ES.
Excellent!
xo
EV
Duh! Of course! Don't be silly! :D
Luvin this work of tender erotica, ES.
Excellent!
xo
EV
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re: Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
16th May 2015 2:43am
Awe EV......oh you know i can't help but be silly......LOL!!!! Thank you for the luvin......Mawhahahaha! Xo :)
Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
14th May 2015 11:54am
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16th May 2015 2:47am
Wow! MrM......I'm highly honored to see you stop my way.....you're one the best of erotic writers......thank you.....you've made me smile......xo :)
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14th May 2015 2:08pm
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16th May 2015 2:48am
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Anonymous
14th May 2015 9:49pm
Above my breast, a little to the left is where I feel this poem. . .a stunning write, Miss Flower. . .xoxo, Devlin;)

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re: Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
16th May 2015 2:49am
Sweet Dev......your words touch me in the same place.....thank you my luvly friend.....xo :)
Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
15th May 2015 7:41am
For as long as I've known you...I definitely know one thing. You write from the heart and experiences...and we're all luck to read them.
BOOM!!! This hit the spot.
Your such a romantic😆
BOOM!!! This hit the spot.
Your such a romantic😆
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re: Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
Awe Smiles......we have known each other for a while.....thank you for the exciting "BOOM!!!!" Glad it hit a spot.....I would ask where......but I know you will tell me.....LOL!!! Thanks for sharing the romance......honored by the RL add on....xo :)
Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
20th May 2015 1:42am
Hush now, be still
This is profoundly powerful as it sooths me, calms me. I vision a white satin sheet fluffed and settling onto a surface beckoning to me to lay peacefully within the kindest arms. You are truly amazing
This is profoundly powerful as it sooths me, calms me. I vision a white satin sheet fluffed and settling onto a surface beckoning to me to lay peacefully within the kindest arms. You are truly amazing
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re: Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
20th May 2015 4:16am
Sweet AS......your words are much comfort to me.....I can visualize the image you've set before me.....NICE!! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and peacefulness with me.....I think you're amazing too....xo :)
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re: Re: Hush Now & Be Still....
1st Jun 2015 1:06am
Hi my sweet friend.....great to see you back......I'm glad you liked this one......honored by the RL add on.....thank you xo :)
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 4:03am
Oh, I have a feeling he can feel you, it, everything.

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4th Aug 2015 5:04am
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 4:03am
Oh, I have a feeling he can feel you, it, everything.

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Re: Re. Hush Now & Be Still....
25th Aug 2019 4:14am
Hey HF.......thank you for visiting the oldies.......I’m so happy you like this one.......appreciate your special words........I write exactly what I feel from my inspiration.......purple luv & hugs xo :)