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wish i still was...
as im laying there
my breathing stopped
and they don't know why...
call it magic?
but i survived..
i couldn't speak
or move for help
and my eyes were tiny little slits...
choking, i froze
my brain not in my head
and i was floating... right above me...
as i layed there
i saw my breath stop
and i wondered if i could feel my heart still
floating....floating away...
suddenly
im sucked back into my body
and im filled with life...
i wish it would have lasted
for more that a moment...
my breathing stopped
and they don't know why...
call it magic?
but i survived..
i couldn't speak
or move for help
and my eyes were tiny little slits...
choking, i froze
my brain not in my head
and i was floating... right above me...
as i layed there
i saw my breath stop
and i wondered if i could feel my heart still
floating....floating away...
suddenly
im sucked back into my body
and im filled with life...
i wish it would have lasted
for more that a moment...
Published 23rd May 2011
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24th May 2011 5:02am
this is a good poem i think instead of it being in the misc. poems it should be in the self poems. it seems more about yourself.
24th May 2011 1:32pm
thank you(: and i wasnt sure where it shuiold be placed, so ill do that(: thanks luv <3
