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Just a Kiss
A fluttery kiss
Barely touching
The pale red
Of delicate lips
The tip of your tongue
Subtlety slipped
Cool and careful
Igniting, inflaming
Spreading a fire
Deep into shadows
Between my thighs
Initiating soothing wetness
To steady the fire
To ready the flame
Barely touching
The pale red
Of delicate lips
The tip of your tongue
Subtlety slipped
Cool and careful
Igniting, inflaming
Spreading a fire
Deep into shadows
Between my thighs
Initiating soothing wetness
To steady the fire
To ready the flame
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Re: Just a Kiss
12th May 2015 10:42pm
a lovely, sensuous poem -
gosh, when you ask for a light
you really ask for a light,
don't you..:)
gosh, when you ask for a light
you really ask for a light,
don't you..:)
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re: Re: Just a Kiss
12th May 2015 10:44pm
I only ever ask for a light when I am immersed in darkness. Thank you, Dartford. I am not as clever as you on my best day.
re: re: Re: Just a Kiss
12th May 2015 10:53pm
Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 00:09am
that's the primary objective of a Kiss. excellent prologue to a very sexy fantasy...
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Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 00:43am
I can almost hear your sultry voice offering these instructions, to obeyed to the letter. I'm sure your fire never dies sweet Virginia. A kiss at the very least. I love this.
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Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 00:49am
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Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 1:34am
Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 1:54am
Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 4:27am
Soft and crisp, sweet and smooth, deep and intimate, everything perfect about a kiss, you left in the mood of this poem. Fantastic write, my sweet Virginia.
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Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 5:39am
Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 11:23am
I like the transition of lips of the mouth to the lips between the thighs. nice write.
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Re: Just a Kiss
13th May 2015 5:23pm
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