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"More"
She takes great pride
Relishes each sensation
Nurturing, loving, caring
Through every day of gestation
From the first ultrasound
Revealing that faint, rapid heartbeat
To the gift of life, clutching
Tiny hands and feet
Always giving, sharing her all
Protection, adoration, direction when needed
Firm foundation shown
Focus on others, never conceited
Capable of unconditional love
We envy and wish to emulate
There's more to her than we'll ever know
The woman we wish to celebrate
On this, her special Mother's Day
*Reposted in honor of all mothers*
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9th May 2015 8:09pm
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10th May 2015 4:09am
Mama of 2 thanks you, too;). . .Beautiful. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
P.S. Don't forget your mother, VP!
P.S. Don't forget your mother, VP!

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11th May 2015 5:10am
My pleasure, Devlin. Thank you for the kind words.
Happy Mother's Day!
No chance of forgetting Mom. Though we be many miles apart, we remain close. She is always near in spirit.
xo
C.
Happy Mother's Day!
No chance of forgetting Mom. Though we be many miles apart, we remain close. She is always near in spirit.
xo
C.
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10th May 2015 4:53am
Awe EV......you have a precious soul......so very luving.....appreciate you much.....beautiful tribute......thank you for thoughtfulness of so many.....luv and hugs xo :)
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11th May 2015 5:13am
I appreciate you much, ES.
Your gracious remarks are met with sincere gratitude.
Luv and hugs back at ya!
xo
EV
Your gracious remarks are met with sincere gratitude.
Luv and hugs back at ya!
xo
EV
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10th May 2015 8:04am
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11th May 2015 5:16am
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10th May 2015 11:09pm
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11th May 2015 5:18am
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11th May 2015 2:30pm
Clearly your mother did a wonderful job and I would like to send a Thank You to her !
....and Thank You for fantastic ink ; )
....and Thank You for fantastic ink ; )
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12th May 2015 4:26am
D.ª Lena, que pasa a lo largo de su "Gracias" a mamá. Ella dijo: "Sí yo (ella) hice un muy buen trabajo!" :)
Eres demasiado amable.
Muchas gracias!
Eres demasiado amable.
Muchas gracias!
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11th May 2015 11:56pm
This is not what I expected from VegasPoet, but a wonderful surprise no less. A tremendous tribute.
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12th May 2015 4:29am
Pleased to know you found it a wonderful surprise, LL.
Thank you for sharing your kind remarks.
Thank you for sharing your kind remarks.
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13th May 2015 1:45pm
I would expect nothing less from you C. You are aware and in tune to a woman's needs which generally stems from a good relationship with one's mother.
However, there is a difference between a good and healthy relationship with one's mother and being a mama's boy!! (YOU KNOW!)
Thank you for the great tribute to mothers out there, including myself...a mother of one crazy little girl and longing for one more!
XO
Natalie
However, there is a difference between a good and healthy relationship with one's mother and being a mama's boy!! (YOU KNOW!)
Thank you for the great tribute to mothers out there, including myself...a mother of one crazy little girl and longing for one more!
XO
Natalie
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14th May 2015 5:02am
Thank you, Natalie.
I seem to recall something about a certain mama's boy within your circle. :)
My pleasure. Here's wishing you, "one more" or two. :)
xo
C.
I seem to recall something about a certain mama's boy within your circle. :)
My pleasure. Here's wishing you, "one more" or two. :)
xo
C.