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"First"
Hot August Nights
Shimmering rods, gals and evenings
A glance, another, smiles in unison
That look which speaks, believing
Established contact
Common urge
We plan, meet again over drinks
Lusting to merge
Converse, laugh and flirt
Open discussion ensues
Her hand finds mine
'What if I told you'
'My age is twenty-eight'
She speaks to confess
'And I've never done this'
Softly offers her request
Voice of absolute proof
'Please be my first'
Her eyes beg approval
While conveying thirst
'I am not a virgin'
The tone not contrary
Delicate grip tightens
'Will you take my anal cherry'
My mind races
Whether it be drinks, timing or obsession
Provoking her prized offer
A quick reply, "Of course" showing no repression
Details remain for others to imagine
Knowing I display care
Opening her precious gift
Priceless pleasures to share
*August 11, 2012*
Published 11th May 2015
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
11th May 2015 7:54am
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12th May 2015 4:56am
Uh, does what? Did who? ;)
Thank you, S!
Your visits are always a kick!
xo
C.
Thank you, S!
Your visits are always a kick!
xo
C.
11th May 2015 2:10pm
12th May 2015 4:54am
D.ª Lena, la oficina está caliente porque usted está en él. :)
Muchas gracias!
Eres demasiado dulce.
Muchas gracias!
Eres demasiado dulce.
12th May 2015 00:13am
This is more of what I am accustomed to, VegasPoet.
Your "More" poem surprised me. A competent contribution to both categories. I must agree with the previous comment, hot.
Your "More" poem surprised me. A competent contribution to both categories. I must agree with the previous comment, hot.
12th May 2015 5:14am
LL, I've written many styles, nearly all from experience. Whether they be competent contributions, I know not, but thank you for sharing your positive feedback.
Anonymous
12th May 2015 6:32am
"Priceless pleasures to share". . .indeed, VP;) I really enjoyed the openness of this piece, particularly the sacredness of losing one's virginity. . .xoxo, Devlin.
13th May 2015 6:07am
Devlin, your insightful remarks are met with sincere appreciation. Your feedback is held in high regard.
xo
C.
xo
C.
Dang EV......my imagination tells me that was one hell of a juicy cherry sexy gift.....mmmm.....yummy.....enjoyed.....luv and juice your way.....I mean.....luv and hugs xo :)
Whawhahaha!! Xo :)
Whawhahaha!! Xo :)
14th May 2015 4:48am
Ohhhh, ES you are a temptress.
Luv juice, uh, I meant, luv and juice on you, er, I meant, right back at you! Muahhahahahahahh!
You are a riot! Thank you for the laughs! :D
Luv and hugs.
xo
EV
Luv juice, uh, I meant, luv and juice on you, er, I meant, right back at you! Muahhahahahahahh!
You are a riot! Thank you for the laughs! :D
Luv and hugs.
xo
EV
