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Waiting
Sitting here waiting
for the world to end
Listening to people
judging and rating
me and my friends.
They say the world will end,
i say hooray,
I ask them when
they say today.
Alas here i am,
still waiting
thinking oh hot damn
for the world to end
Listening to people
judging and rating
me and my friends.
They say the world will end,
i say hooray,
I ask them when
they say today.
Alas here i am,
still waiting
thinking oh hot damn
Published 22nd May 2011
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22nd May 2011 4:42am
fair play benji.
i thought this was well written and easy to read.
i am not sure you need coma's at the end of lines
this is a credit to you benji.
i thought this was well written and easy to read.
i am not sure you need coma's at the end of lines
this is a credit to you benji.
23rd May 2011 1:49pm
22nd May 2011 2:53pm
