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Little
Yesterday I had a little thought
Inside my little head
My prayers had been answered
And my father was dead
But this little thought
Was a little thought that lied
And despite my prayer he hadn’t died
Another 9 years of dogs abuse
From the drunkard lord of all things obtuse
Who only hugged in order to crush
And the sexual abuse he wanted to hush
For all this pain I should probably bill him
But I had a little thought
Inside my little head
I should probably just kill him
Inside my little head
My prayers had been answered
And my father was dead
But this little thought
Was a little thought that lied
And despite my prayer he hadn’t died
Another 9 years of dogs abuse
From the drunkard lord of all things obtuse
Who only hugged in order to crush
And the sexual abuse he wanted to hush
For all this pain I should probably bill him
But I had a little thought
Inside my little head
I should probably just kill him
Published 3rd May 2015
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3rd May 2015 00:34am
3rd May 2015 1:59am
not really good - experience makes good poems - straight from the heart of my memory banks :-)
thank you do much for reading and your positive comment :-)
thank you do much for reading and your positive comment :-)
3rd May 2015 00:58am
Revenge seems sweet but the taste is only short term and rarely worth the bitter aftertaste. Still thoughts tend to remain salivate worthy. This piece was brilliantly composed.
3rd May 2015 2:01am
thank you for your read and positive comments :-)
the problem with revenge is that we very rarely carry it out - we all talk a good talk :-)
the problem with revenge is that we very rarely carry it out - we all talk a good talk :-)
3rd May 2015 1:12am
you have a way with words David....
a powerful story and point is told and made...
a powerful story and point is told and made...
3rd May 2015 2:02am
thank you so much for reading and the things you said - sometimes to mak a point your words have to be short :-)
3rd May 2015 1:25am
3rd May 2015 2:03am
coming from a wordsmith such as yourself I am deeply honoured by your comment if somewhat coy
:-) x 1,000,000
:-) x 1,000,000
3rd May 2015 7:27pm
4th May 2015 10:10pm
its sad you have also had these feelings :-(
thank you for reading and your kind comments :-)
thank you for reading and your kind comments :-)
3rd May 2015 9:40pm
A hard topic to write about David, but well done :3 enjoyable and plays with the heart strings :3
4th May 2015 10:09pm
I find these hard topics theraputic to right about
Thank you for reading and understanding :-)
Thank you for reading and understanding :-)
4th May 2015 4:27am
Brilliantly expressed; sometimes even the darkest experiences in life can bring forth their own light.
4th May 2015 10:08pm
thank you for reading and such a positive response
:-)
everything is either light or dust
:-)
everything is either light or dust
