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Flattered
Break my Holy heart?
Don't flatter yourself!
My heart is made of bone
and even the layman
knows, a bone will not break
In the same place twice.
Don't flatter yourself!
My heart is made of bone
and even the layman
knows, a bone will not break
In the same place twice.
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Re: Flattered
27th Apr 2015 1:46am
Re: Flattered
Anonymous
27th Apr 2015 2:03am
Fool me once, shame on you.
Fool me twice, shame on me!
Wow, Scarlett_A, you've really captured that brilliantly in this piece. Loved it!. . .xoxo, Devlin.
Fool me twice, shame on me!
Wow, Scarlett_A, you've really captured that brilliantly in this piece. Loved it!. . .xoxo, Devlin.
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27th Apr 2015 3:08am
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27th Apr 2015 12:56pm
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Anonymous
27th Apr 2015 8:38pm
excellent
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Re: Flattered
9th Jul 2015 3:35pm
ScarlettA, luv ~ :-*
This poem is magnificently disdainful, superbly crafted, concise, yet conveying a wealth of meaning. Exceedingly well written, luv. You are quite a talent. :-*
This poem is magnificently disdainful, superbly crafted, concise, yet conveying a wealth of meaning. Exceedingly well written, luv. You are quite a talent. :-*
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