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Anacampserote
Silvicultrix
Just random moves
with
The heart taken out
My love
My eyes
My passion
My respect
All gone
We moan.
Capernoited
Seeds of love
along
The alone tree
with
a lot yet to happen
our love
was divine
was pure
Where are you ?
are you listening ?
My words
My ideals
My love
...................Come soon.........................
Just random moves
with
The heart taken out
My love
My eyes
My passion
My respect
All gone
We moan.
Capernoited
Seeds of love
along
The alone tree
with
a lot yet to happen
our love
was divine
was pure
Where are you ?
are you listening ?
My words
My ideals
My love
...................Come soon.........................
Published 24th Apr 2015
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25th Apr 2015 2:24am
Okay. I believe the title word signifies a root reputed to have properties to return lost love. Capernoited means intoxicated. And a silvicultrix is a kind of bird (one that hums?). It isn't necessary to know the definitions to these to understand your other fine words, and the melancholy therein. Moving lines combined in an innovative structure. Fine work, McJay. I hope he hears your plea.
25th Apr 2015 6:06am
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25th Apr 2015 5:57am
Anacampserote
A tough word to deal with.But it is a nice poetry in terms of flow.Magical.
A tough word to deal with.But it is a nice poetry in terms of flow.Magical.
25th Apr 2015 6:08am
Anonymous
25th Apr 2015 9:57am
Beautiful words of love and hope
2nd May 2015 00:14am
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30th Apr 2015 8:29pm
Anonymous
2nd May 2015 12:24pm
such a lovely use of language in this wistful piece
10th May 2015 6:07pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Dec 2018 6:37pm
1st Dec 2018 9:53pm
Good luck in the comp, mcjay. Your participation will help us get the theme #RobertFrost implemented.
