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There's an empty old house in Bulgaria
at the foot of the mountains,
near a European fault line.
It has large windows and a green porch.
A dream going cheap
for the same price as my beat-up VW
or half a British holiday.
With no immediate neighbours,
it comes with its own land
complete with fruit trees
and outbuildings.
There's space
to grow things--
keep a donkey
and oh,
there's a well as well
I could learn the language
embrace the community
maybe find some answers
I can't find
where my life is today.
at the foot of the mountains,
near a European fault line.
It has large windows and a green porch.
A dream going cheap
for the same price as my beat-up VW
or half a British holiday.
With no immediate neighbours,
it comes with its own land
complete with fruit trees
and outbuildings.
There's space
to grow things--
keep a donkey
and oh,
there's a well as well
I could learn the language
embrace the community
maybe find some answers
I can't find
where my life is today.
Published 14th Nov 2009
| Edited 3rd Aug 2012
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2009 11:19pm
A strange and powerful little poem. The use of that little house in Bulgaria as a symbol was really quite inspired. And the last line was... well, just stunning. I look forward to reading your other work.
15th Nov 2009 00:05am
You have given this building such a physical presence.
If it didn't expose you to aswers the questions might get closer to the point?
If it didn't expose you to aswers the questions might get closer to the point?
Anonymous
15th Nov 2009 4:08am
so stirring,i love it.u have used the house image to convey so many things.And the title is apt too!
15th Jan 2010 5:37pm
If only running away to some place new would solve all of our problems.... We'd all be marathon runners for the rest of our lives, wouldn't we? Maybe we are if only in our heads.
