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Skies

The sky is blue
but I feel bluer
and the thing is
I don't see sunshine
on the horizon.

Written by CafeineCadavre

Published 23rd Apr 2015

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Re: Skies

23rd Apr 2015 10:31pm

I like the conversational tone (or shade,
or colour or whatever, which is individually
expressed).

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24th Apr 2015 10:43am

Thank you lovely

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