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Chrysopeleia
She shades herself
in the stillness of the
early morning light
beautiful woman-girl
her noticeable shyness surrounds,
she blends into
the natural beauty of the woodlands
and try as I might
an intimate touch seems outside
the reach of my hands....
…..so close and yet so far away
wondering
if there are
pink shadows reflecting
life from diamond eyes,
rays of light and warmth
radiate in between
pale, nubile thighs
Can a mortal man
find peace in the place
where lies her quiet spirit,
lovely nymph can I steal
away the soul
of you........?
Standing in awe of your
reticent glow
tinged with a darkness,
melancholy remnants
of days gone by,
traces of silent tears
in solitude, she has cried
….for she just wants to feel love
so endow me beautiful dryad,
allow me enter
your tender heart
sweet and sensual,
I will lay my mortality
against your immortality
and my body
shall make love to yours, deeply
beneath moon and stars
let me be the solace
found within
your forest green......
…shall I be the tall oak
that shall guide and
comfort thee
through all time ?
Beautiful Chrysopeleia...
...in the stillness of the
early morning,
I shall take you
and you will make love to me.
(....in tribute to a very gentle, peaceful friend of mine )
Published 22nd Apr 2015
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23rd Apr 2015 11:46am
Elegantly writen. This poem was meant to woo instead of just convey lust. Well done!
24th Apr 2015 3:48am
The beauty of this poem is beyond words. If you hadn't told me I would not have known for I am not worthy. Honoured and humbled:)MrM.
29th Apr 2015 5:05am
It's gentle and every bold break brings a spike of feeling and desire back from the music of narration.
State-breaks used as anchors are something I've been trying to improve on lately, so it's inspiring to see it done naturally in so much of your work. Thanks for that MrM!
State-breaks used as anchors are something I've been trying to improve on lately, so it's inspiring to see it done naturally in so much of your work. Thanks for that MrM!
4th May 2015 6:28pm
14th Aug 2015 4:14am
Ok, this is one of the most sensually beautiful pieces I have had the pleasure to actually sit & read.
Very very gorgeous & mentally engorging, emotionally titillating..
-Howlings
Very very gorgeous & mentally engorging, emotionally titillating..
-Howlings
24th Nov 2015 6:51am
This is a truly gorgeous piece with a perfectly soft and sensual atmosphere. I'm glad I found this gem.
melancholy remnants
of days gone by,
traces of silent tears
in solitude, she has cried
….for she just wants to feel love
so endow me beautiful dryad,
allow me enter
your tender heart
sweet and sensual
I will lay my mortality
against your immortality
Love every single part of this poem, but these lines were the pinnacle!!!
Not only were they brilliant (the last two, wow) but they moved me deeply and made me tear up...
You have a way with words that is beyond compare, I have stars in my eyes in awe!
of days gone by,
traces of silent tears
in solitude, she has cried
….for she just wants to feel love
so endow me beautiful dryad,
allow me enter
your tender heart
sweet and sensual
I will lay my mortality
against your immortality
Love every single part of this poem, but these lines were the pinnacle!!!
Not only were they brilliant (the last two, wow) but they moved me deeply and made me tear up...
You have a way with words that is beyond compare, I have stars in my eyes in awe!
