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Softer Than A Whisper
when life is still I lay in silence
that's when I hear your heart whisper
such a sweet sound of luv
causes mine to stop so it can listen
never heard luv so sweetly spoken before
than when your whispers echo vibrate my soul
as our souls move closer together
with sacred words our spirits connect
somewhere way beyond the clouds of heaven
universe inhabited by just you and me
where our passion meets as my body sleeps
heart beating to your sweet soft whispers
(Inspiration ~ "Softer Than A Whisper"
By Hal Ketchum")
that's when I hear your heart whisper
such a sweet sound of luv
causes mine to stop so it can listen
never heard luv so sweetly spoken before
than when your whispers echo vibrate my soul
as our souls move closer together
with sacred words our spirits connect
somewhere way beyond the clouds of heaven
universe inhabited by just you and me
where our passion meets as my body sleeps
heart beating to your sweet soft whispers
(Inspiration ~ "Softer Than A Whisper"
By Hal Ketchum")
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Re: Softer Than A Whisper
19th Apr 2015 10:45pm
Only love of a heart can whisper to another heart like that. Great poem Gail. Love ya
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re: Re: Softer Than A Whisper
20th Apr 2015 4:12am
Hey Darlin.....good to see you.....you're always so sweet to me....thank you for your sensitve words.....MAWH!!! Xo :)
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Anonymous
19th Apr 2015 10:59pm
It is truly spiritual what our hearts can hear when we truly listen. Beautiful song, beautiful poem!
I like the picture too, kind of like my profile pic:)
I like the picture too, kind of like my profile pic:)

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re: Re: Softer Than A Whisper
20th Apr 2015 4:15am
Hey SG.....I try to listen more these days.....glad that you liked the poem and the pic does match your avatar......very cool.....thank you for your graceful words....xo :)
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20th Apr 2015 4:24am
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re: Re: Softer Than A Whisper
23rd Apr 2015 3:03am
Sweet S......your words always makes my heart warm......thank you for sharing smiles with me......xo :)
Re: Softer Than A Whisper
20th Apr 2015 7:40am
Awwhh, ES. This is a quality piece. Exceedingly well written.
Many truths herein.
XO
EV
Many truths herein.
XO
EV
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re: Re: Softer Than A Whisper
23rd Apr 2015 3:05am
Awe Sweet EV......you always being a smile and emotion when you leave me touching words......thank you xo :)
Re: Softer Than A Whisper
20th Apr 2015 5:15pm
You're a sweet and gentle soul, Flowergirl. This is a sacred poem to be read in your chapel. A soothing song too. More fine work from a poet whisperer.
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re: Re: Softer Than A Whisper
23rd Apr 2015 3:09am
Awe Sweet Crow......you're so kind with your words to me......appreciate you sharing a whisper with me......xo :)
Re: Softer Than A Whisper
Anonymous
21st Apr 2015 8:37pm
Hal Ketchum, huh, Miss Flowergirl? I hadn't heard that name in years. Damn, I must be ancient!
Oh, no need to comment on this piece. The "add" says it all for me!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
Oh, no need to comment on this piece. The "add" says it all for me!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)

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re: Re: Softer Than A Whisper
23rd Apr 2015 3:14am
Hi Sexy Dev......oh luvin me some Hal.....own a few of his CDs...LOL!! Saw Kenny Chesney the other weekend......stood right by the stage the whole night......he touched my friends hand....what a hottie!!!! Im honored by the RL add on....thank you sweet friend....xo :)