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Sunshine
Ice cubes
in cold lemonade.
A red and white striped
bendy straw.
The smell of sunscreen
and salt spray.
Tar baking in the hot sun.
Seagulls shrieking above head.
The low, hushed sound of ocean waves
crashing against the shore.
I could stay here
forevermore.
in cold lemonade.
A red and white striped
bendy straw.
The smell of sunscreen
and salt spray.
Tar baking in the hot sun.
Seagulls shrieking above head.
The low, hushed sound of ocean waves
crashing against the shore.
I could stay here
forevermore.
Published 14th Apr 2015
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15th Apr 2015 3:53pm
I feel like this does a good job capturing the "summertime feels", but could have maybe went on to make the scene more vivid.
Good work either way!
Good work either way!
